feedback on the killer

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ltmtpenguinalt_888 (01), Dec 11, 2012.

  1. Tell me what you think and don't post on the story please
     
  2. Interesting. Use paragraphs and a more diverse vocabulary for a better effect!
     
  3. I realized the paragraphs thing after I posted it, I got so into it sorry bout that
     
  4. New chapter out now!!!!
     
  5. Though I don't think anybody cares I know of 1 fan. Oh well
     
  6. I'll be posting a new chapter in case anyone reads it. ( and yes I feel like talking to myself)