Feedback for The Mercenary

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 18, 2010.

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  1. This is my feedback thread feel free to post about the story. I have used someone else's idea for the start, but have changed it massively. If you like the story post cos if enough people like it I will make another one!!
     
    #1 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 18, 2010
  2. I like it. Good job keep up the good work. You've got alot of ideas.
     
    #2 *krypton134 (01), Dec 18, 2010
  3. I didn't do description cos I didn't fell like it, but I have 14 pages written out which I will be uploading shortly
     
    #3 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 18, 2010
  4. Feel* damn spell checker
     
    #4 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 18, 2010
  5. Not bad keep writing
     
    #5 Storallelite, Dec 18, 2010
  6. Theirs a massive twist you'll see
     
    #6 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 18, 2010
  7.  Good job.
     
    #7 __STORM__, Dec 19, 2010
  8. Next chapter is out now!!
     
    #8 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 19, 2010
  9. Awesome story
     
    #9 kila, Dec 19, 2010
  10. Maybe If you send this to a author you can get it published
     
    #10 kila, Dec 19, 2010
  11. Next chapter is out, im trying to get it finished by the end of the holidays so...
     
    #11 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 19, 2010
  12. Good job on the story
     
    #12 kila, Dec 19, 2010
  13. Really good. And I bet it would get published. Never heard any story like it
     
    #13 __STORM__, Dec 19, 2010
  14. The newest chapter is out!!
     
    #14 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 19, 2010
  15. You're a fast typer! Good chapter
     
    #15 Storallelite, Dec 19, 2010
  16. I typing one every night takes my mind of all the crap I have to put up with
     
    #16 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 20, 2010
  17. There is a story by the same title if you didn't know 

    iZ
     
    #17 Nlaz, Dec 20, 2010
  18. Read the start iZ explains
     
    #18 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 20, 2010
  19. You didn't acknowledged who the author was. Nor did you clarify. You said you copied the beginning not the title. If you neglect both of those factors, it'll be a pain in the arse. Lucky for you the real "The Mercenary" writer isn't on as much. Gives you time to change the title perhaps. Saves you the hassle.

    iZ
     
    #19 Nlaz, Dec 20, 2010
  20. I'm editing after im finished so I do it then ok?
     
    #20 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 20, 2010
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