feedback for my fail story a.k.a Marcus humanity

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *IRONhulk (01), Sep 9, 2011.

  1. Post your comments and criticism! Honstly I know I'm rushing it but I'm an impatient person.
     
    #1 *IRONhulk (01), Sep 9, 2011
  2. Eh posted a short little post and no their are no chapters
     
    #2 *IRONhulk (01), Sep 9, 2011
  3. Great story hulk. Tell another.
     
    #3 *babygurl2112 (01), Sep 9, 2011
  4. Why tell another when I'm not finished 0-0
     
    #4 *IRONhulk (01), Sep 9, 2011
  5. Ehm just posted the emergency gif
     
    #5 *IRONhulk (01), Sep 9, 2011
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