Alright, I'm not sure how many people have been reading KI and who's enjoyed/disliked it. So! I'd love if anyone who's read the story to please post what you whether you liked it or not, why, what I can make better, etc. It'd really help me out and also let me get a general feel for audience reactions. If you just want to say you read it, that's cool too. Would like to see what audiences I'm reaching. All comments, feedback, ideas, questions, etc. are welcome! For people with questions, I'll try to answer ASAP. Same with ideas. If I do like an idea, I'll get in contact with you. Thanks! Happy reading.
Thanks for the comments! Chapter 8 out now!! Chapter 9 out tomorrow depending on how much I write. More explanations too. Not to much action these next couple, mostly explanations, background and connections.
I like you. I dunno if that came off creepy, but lemme explain a little. I judge people. A lot. A little more than that, actually. Writing well gives you bonus points. Capturing the essence of the confusion that comes with realizing that you're totally ****ing insane gives you a lot more. Hey. It's good stuff. You as a person, I think you're very goodhearted, and a nice mediator. (Forgive me if I make assumptions, I enjoy reading people. Perhaps a little too much.) You care a lot about your story, that much is clear, and that translates to a good person. Some exceptions. Anyways, tl;dr, you're cool, I'm crazy, and your story is well written.
Chapter 10 up. Any feedback's helpful, just tell me what you think. More background or more murders coming up?
I love this story a lot. Its very... suspenseful. Just like something I would actually read. Good job!!
A few grammatical error, but nothing like most. I.e; 'my freind the bucher kild somebodey'. Great story. Keep up the good work, tig.
Great story! You do a fantastic job creating suspense and you put some very interesting turns in which I like. But the negatives: you don't have great grammar and it would help your stories if it was better. So all in all great story and please continue!