Feather's Critique Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Jul 14, 2011.

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  1. You can rant and give feedback on my more... well justified bad reviews. You can also give thanks for my good reviews. Either way, no story is safe from Feather.
     
    #1 FeatherHunter, Jul 14, 2011
  2. Good for you old bean.
     
    #2 Eagleking, Jul 14, 2011
  3. Lol.
     
    #3 FeatherHunter, Jul 14, 2011
  4. *from

    You used the word twice.
     
    #4 cheesemuffin, Jul 15, 2011
  5. iPimella, read your critique ;)
     
    #5 FeatherHunter, Aug 3, 2011
  6. Do one on Stranded, not finished yet but getting there, I've had a lot of work so it hasn't been updated lately.
     
    #6 *camotan12 (01), Aug 3, 2011
  7. Did u have to emphasize my lack of spelling skills? (lol)
     
    #7 Storallelite, Aug 3, 2011
  8. ༄Nice job bro! Its really well done༄

    iZaln
     
    #8 Nlaz, Aug 3, 2011
  9. To have a critique done on you story, the story must meet this criteria:

    It must be finished.
    Have more than 7 chapters; unless specifically noted it is a short story.
     
    #9 FeatherHunter, Aug 3, 2011
  10. Wah...I don't think mine meets the criteria
     
    #10 Storallelite, Aug 3, 2011
  11. Why not.
     
    #11 FeatherHunter, Aug 3, 2011
  12. It's not finished
     
    #12 Storallelite, Aug 3, 2011
  13. Is there a part one?
     
    #13 FeatherHunter, Aug 3, 2011
  14. Crap all crap
     
    #14 *IRONhulk (01), Aug 3, 2011
  15. Part one?
     
    #15 Storallelite, Aug 3, 2011
  16. Cut the story in half. Lately, I have lost interest in Atlantric. I smell funky review...
     
    #16 FeatherHunter, Aug 4, 2011
  17. Feather you can smell funky review? o_O
     
    #17 *TigerstarandJaystar (01), Aug 4, 2011
  18. Feth you're going to hate me soon :p I have a cruel idea for my story.

    MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
     
    #18 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Aug 4, 2011
  19. And thanks for feedback on every chapter that I post :)
     
    #19 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Aug 4, 2011
  20. Mine doesnt meet the criteria. I haven't had any bad comments yet!!! :( well that should a smiley, but whatever haha
     
    #20 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Aug 4, 2011
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