feather criticize here before my story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *camotan12 (01), Jun 29, 2011.

  1. This is for featherhunter to go ahead and criticize the story before I have written it. If you looked on my casting forum or thread idk what it is supposed to be called you can see he was already criticizing before I even started so here you go FeatherHunter.
     
  2. This was a waste of space.
    This is like the Ghoomba-Bastion fued.

    Except he could never be any of them.
     
  3. Seriously dude, this was a big waste of space.