Fangs- Choose your fangs feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Tonks (01), Oct 15, 2010.

  1. Please read Fangs- Choose your fangs first, and then come here to talk about the story, praise me, and/or critizize me to help me get better! Thanks! :D
     
    #1 *Tonks (01), Oct 15, 2010
  2. Make another chapter and make it into a book I won't it lol I'm serious I do
     
    #2 *little_p (01), Oct 15, 2010
  3. Ya no bad launguage I'm only 12 so ya
     
    #3 *little_p (01), Oct 15, 2010
  4. Yay thanks little_p! and i'm not that much diffrent in age from you so theere won't be any searing at all! :D
     
    #4 *Tonks (01), Oct 15, 2010
  5. How old are you Im going to turn thirteen in may and I get my license when I'm 15
     
    #5 *little_p (01), Oct 15, 2010
  6. not saying but between 10 and 20
     
    #6 *Tonks (01), Oct 15, 2010
  7. 16 I'm guessing 16 or 15 or 13 wall me with your age please
     
    #7 *little_p (01), Oct 15, 2010
  8. Really good! Post more please!
     
    #8 *lady-marian (01), Oct 15, 2010
  9. Thanks! I won't be posting untill monday i alft my noeboom with the next chappie in it at school over a long weekend lol :lol: I'm such a fail
     
    #9 *Tonks (01), Oct 16, 2010
  10. Nice I like if :D.
     
    #10 *krypton134 (01), Oct 16, 2010
  11. It not if lol
     
    #11 *krypton134 (01), Oct 16, 2010
  12. Chapter two is up people! Go read it and return to tell me what you thought!!!!
     
    #12 *Tonks (01), Oct 17, 2010
  13. I love it id defineiyley buy make sure u keep ur own don't make it like alpha omega(book and movie) or eclipse(book and movie)
     
    #13 Turbo23456, Oct 17, 2010
  14. Its reakly goid
     
    #14 *little_p (01), Oct 17, 2010
  15. Haven't read it. But I'd throw swearing in every now and then. Shows more a relatable personality.
     
    #15 *OddlyYouSawMe (01), Oct 18, 2010
  16. Isn't your name Nymphadora
     
    #16 Fangedwolf, Dec 16, 2010
  17. The story isn't very ORIGINAL!!! It's so obvious Tonks copied ideas from Warriors!!!(Erin Hunter)
     
    #17 *TigresZ (01), Dec 16, 2010
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