It is 1752, and humanity has grown, conquering everything in their path. They are the ultimate being, having created for themselves artificial superpowers. Absolutely nothing could stop the Humans... Until one day, when the Gorzon were awakened by a certain Human by the name of Angel... - It was dark when she woke up, and cold. 'Where am I?' she thought, and then she remembered. She'd ordered those idiot scientists to launch her holding pod out of the hellhole they called 12. As she remembered, she realized how close she was to her destination. The pod crashed into the side of the mountain, the same mountain in which lay the last of them. The only fossil that humans could not touch, for fear of awakening it. Ironicly enough, there was a mining expedition going on there when she landed, and she knew just what she was going to do with the crew. She felt the power pulse through her as she silently commanded them from inside the pod. Within minutes, the last Zorgon was released from it's prison as the roberium bomb went off. ----------------——------------------------------ "Damnit!" Andre yelled when he saw the junkie's car burn up. He'd been trying to use his powers after he'd been released from 6, but he still hadn't gotten control over them. The decorative flames coming off the sides quickly enveloped the hovercar, and before long the thing exploded. "damn...." Just then, his friend Luther, also from 6, appeared in front of him, his electric aura trailing behind him from the town's main wire. "I swear to god, Luther, do you have to show it off?" "What, that I can teleport with wires?" A miniature inferno erupted right next to him. "Alright, alright, Ill stop!" Andre and Luther hadn't gotten along really well over the past year, but if they had stopped arguing for one second, they would have seen the air between them start rippling, and then Logan appeared. The most controlled of the trio, Logan was also the smartest. "OK, enough screwing around, we've got work to do!" Both his friends said in unison, "What magical thing did you find now?" "Take a look" It was the crater from three weeks before. When it had appeared that night, in a fiery explosion, the little metal box in it had opened, and out had stumbled Angel, the mysterious girl who fell from the sky. Since then, everything had changed. Everyone had become almost zombielike, and the whole town, except for Logan, Luther and Andre, had dropped their normal excitement and slowed down. The trio had become worried, and with Luther's electric abilities, Andre's neat finger-welder trick, and Logan's planning, they had created the galaxy's first Source-using machine... They called him - CHZ1 -------------------------——--------------------- Sorry if it's not what you expected, I made this ten minutes ago. Please give constructive criticism, and don't be afraid to add new story ideas!
I like it, you got mine and mikes powers reversed, an you need to make an entire story thread, like Fading Fast if your in a company put presented by.... But I like it!