Extras: For Those Who Really Enjoy Them.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Sep 5, 2010.

  1. This is an idea. Writers: post your deleted scenes, speeches, diary entries, drawings, character bases and general extras of your story. This is for those who really like the stories in KaW and wish to learn more about the story itself, or want more pieces of a story that has ended.
    This is ONLY for stories that have been posted and is not a place for random poetry please go to Colonial's thread for that. Thank you 

    Here is an ending speech I was planning to have Aynia say at the very end of No Longer Human. The ending has changed (alot) so this is no longer applicable. However i really love it and it took me forever to write it, so here it is 
    It has been without a doubt a long and difficult trek. We have suffered greatly for our beliefs, for our very existence on this small world. We have undergone atrocities and have been mentally ground down into pathetic shadows of what we once were.

    Yet through those feelings of hopelessness and disaster, we carry on. Slogging through the hatred and the pain, the fear that seems to seep the warmth of your bones from the very core of your existence, you somehow manage to continue marching. Though you know that you never could make it, that tiny spark of hope keeps burning, fanned by the combined wills of those who care wishing for our well being in one combined force that makes an unlit candle into a bonfire. Now I'm no philosopher, just an average being, like everyone else. But because of those supports, those stepping stones, the ropes that pull you out of that snake pit, you survive and inside you slowly begin to become a better person. 
           
    And thanks to those people who I love more than anything else in the world, I'm here. Standing before you in simple garb and simple manner, but not a simple heart or soul. And I thank you all, truly and deeply for all that you have done, the bonds of friendship run deeper than any of us seem to realize i guess. But with this last shout of triumph, I hope that you realize just how much you have done. Thank You.
     
  2. That was a truely amazing speech, Gloomi. And a great thread idea, too.
     
  3. That's a good idea Gloomi! I'll surely post here!
     
  4. Planned ending idea 4 the Demon Chronicles



    The 5 heroes would sacrifice theru lives to destroy the Demon Lord and _________
     
  5. I was going to make this thread... But I guess it makes more sense to bump this one? Idk 
     
  6. interesting...
     
  7. This is this description that I was going to have Elizabeth say in My Sister's Killer about the creature that killed her but then I changed the creature from a vampire to a hideous monster so I had to get rid of it.

    He is standing there, just looking at me.
    A shadow lay across his face.
    The moon light glinted off his pale skin, a crimson liquid stained his face, and it driped slowly onto the floor.
    He lifted one arm up to wipe it from his lips.
    He glances at me briefly and turned for the exit.
    He moved quickly but gracefully.
    A slient killer traveled under the cover of the night.