Evolution

 like it

 

Paragraphing~

 

It's alright, try again. =D

 

Absolutely fantastic. I'd publish you.

 

The paragraphing.

 

I didn't read all of it but what I did was awesome.

 

Yep, but you could always edit that post.

 

You're on the computer. Go to your post and look for the Edit button.

 

Sure. =)

 

u may wanna make a feedback so no one posts on the story

 

We're never gonna let this die Chi. You have to finish it