Eternity, lost love and darkness

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Eric_Northman, Feb 17, 2013.

  1. My love has left and Im now only surrounded by darkness and depression.
    Even though I only knew her from KaW and Skype, it felt more than real.
    My heart is broken and so am I a broken man.
    Alone with darkness for eternity, sleep and death are my only escape.
    If you dont want to be with me, I dont want to be with myself.
    Sometimes I eat myself to happiness, but cry afterwards.
    She said I was fat, and it felt like 1,000 needles stabbing my heart.
    How could you do this to me Melissa, after I said I loved you
    You were my world, my everything and now youre gone.
     
  2. :cry: :lol: idk whether to laugh or cry at this... so im doing both... :lol: :cry:
     
  3. This is just awful. Wth eric.

    Ive read and written plenty of bad poetry but
    what made you decide to post this?

    Your lucky that fan fiction isnt on active topics.

    You fail/ps your emo garbage sucks emo.
    :lol: (;
     
  4. Awesome, I pour my heart and soul out into words and you guys laugh at me, how cool.
     
  5. Don't count me out; I cried too
     
  6. I thought it was good
     
  7. sad stuff :( head up lad.
     
  8. Beautiful poem Eric. I never knew you thought of me in this way.
     
  9. Is this melissa declaring her love? :shock:
     
  10. You may never find out.