This is the first story I've written so yeh I'm a bit nervous. I'll ask you to not post on this thread and you'll post here anyway. I'll scream at you and you'll still probably post here anyway. It's very annoying to readers to have to scroll through comments so pleas do everyone a favor and POST FEEDBACK ON THE FEEDBACK THREAD ONLY its called the"feedback thread" because that's where you put feedback. Without further ado I present to you ESCAPE "ok class as you know seeing as today is the last day of youre schooling youll be assigned jobs based on you're skills" our teacher (Mrs. Tavis) said as she pulled some papers out of her bag " sil bawen" she called out i watched as he nervously walked up to the front of the room"palace guard" Mrs. Tavis concluded handing him his diploma he walked back to his seat and sat down just as mrs. Tavis called the next student "mila berris" she said I saw her get up and walk to the front of the room shaking "soldier" was her job. Mrs.tavis continued to announced the jobs the students would keep for the next 10 years in service to the royal family and because I was last it felt like the 10years would be up by the time my name was called. " nervayu" this finally got my attention seeing as I had a crush on her since well....... forever. "Princess's personal handmaiden" mrs. Tavis said, no surprise the main skill for that is being pretty and she was defiantly pretty she was skinny with silky black hair and deep blue eyes her skin was paleish with a slender look about her. I spaced out for a while till I finally heard my name "webs" she called out I walked to the front of the room hopping my knees didn't give way before I got to her desk. "head soldier" she said. I saw a few of my friends give me jealous looks. It was considered the best fighting job there was. I walked back to my seat hardly able to contain my excitement. ------------------------------- "Now is the perfect time to strike"said a figure in the hood. "don't be to hasty fool"hissed the figure sitting by the table. "The new soldiers are having their first few days on the job and much more vigilant wait till they get a bit bored then we attack". The hooded figure just nodded and walked out ------------------------------------------------