EMILY please read!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by etak, Jun 20, 2011.

  1. Ok this is my first time putting up a story so please be nice.

    Chapter One.

    "Get up Celeste! Get up!"
    That squeaky annoying voice could only belong to one squeaky annoying person.
    "What is it Orla?"
    "Get up Celeste! It's snowing!"
    "How interesting." I rolled over and went back asleep.
    "Celeste! Get up!"
    "Alright, ok."
    Orla ran over to the window and opened the blinds.
    "See? See?"
    "How do you expect me to see when I am blinded?" I still looked though. Orla was right. It was snowing. The whole town was covered in a huge White blanket.
    "And the best part," Orla went on, "There's no school!" she started skipping around the room in her pyjamas. For once in my life I was actually a bit disappointed. Crazy, I know, but today was going to be an easy day, we had had all our Christmas tests last week and we were going to get our history projects today. I like history. Anyway, we may not have work In school but Mum would make up for that. She always does.
    "Ce-le-ste!" my screeching mothers voice shouted up the stairs.
    "Ye have no school because of the snow so get dressed and git down here and feed April!" April was our rabbit. Mine actually. I was the one that did all the feeding and the cleaning out etc. I hurriedly got dressed and ran down the stairs.
    "Now git your lazy bum out that door and feed yer rabbit."
    "Yes, yes, I'm doing it!"
    "Good."
    "I shoved on my wellies and went outside. Mumbling about my mean mother making her child go out in the perishing cold. I was plodding along when I tripped over something. I looked down and gasped. There, lying in the snow, was a thin girl dressed in rags. She seemed to have fainted. I screamed, and ran back into the house......


    I will write more later but PLEASE PEOPLE DO NOT POST HERE I WILL SET UP A FEEDBACK ONE!!!

    and there is a lot of mistakes so please bear with me.
     
  2. Re: "Emily" by etak. Please read!

    "Mum, Mum! There's someone in the garden and, and, and I think shes fainted and I know it sounds crazy but"...
    "Is it a FAIRY Celeste?!" Orla squeaked.
    My mother burst out laughing.
    "Well, Celeste is it?"
    "No! Stop It's, it's, it's... Oh look just come with me."
    My mother reluctantly agreed, lecturing about something or other.
    "See?"
    There was complete silence. We all stood just staring at her for a minute. Then everything sprang back to life.
    "Oh my God you were right! Ok
    We need to get this girl to the hospital an' Now!"
    I grabbed her legs. Mum took her top half. She was very light.
    "Mum do you think she's, she's dead?..."
    Mum swallowed.
    "Celeste I'll be honest wid you, I don't think she is alive, how could anyone survive in this weather?"
    At that exact second she opened her eyes. We both nearly dropped her.
    "Ok, well that's ehh, a bit strange."
    The girl looked around. Besides all the rags she was very beautiful. She had dark, piercing blue eyes that you felt saw right through you. They had White specks and they looked like the day itself. Her hair was down to her legs and a glossy black. She was unusually pale. We brought her into the house and laid her down on the couch. Then my mum grabbed the phone and started dialling 999.
    "Get yer fire brigades and yer ambulances over here! We've a very strange child here there is something very wrong!"
    Mum passed on the address and other details to the man then hung up.
    "Right," she said "The ambulance is on on the way."
     
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  4. "EMILY"

    Please read people