Elysium. The greatest place in Greek Mythology. Also the greatest thing in the world today. Elysium will never be rivaled by another game of this era. Elysium is perfection. ~ Gamer Chris Miller ______________________________ Chris rolled over in bed and punched the alarm clock. "Another day of gaming," Chris said. "I'm so happy." "Knock Knock!", Christina said as she poked her head in the door. "Rise and Shine!" "Just a minute," I said nonchalantly. I rolled out of bed and threw on a shirt and some shorts. I walked into the bathroom and hit the light switch. The bathroom was painted light green, and the tiles on the floor were white. I turned the shower on and stood there in the blissful water. Amazing. After I got out (no, I did not sing), I walked down the stairs and sat down at the table. Fresh bacon and eggs where awaiting me along with a note. On the note it said, "I'm going to an early meeting that will be continued after work, and I will not be home until after 5:00. There is a pizza in the freezer for lunch, set it out at about 11:30 (I know how you forget), and put it in the oven after thawed. The directions are on the side of the box. ~ Christina P.S. Happy birthday! Love you! You took way too long in the shower! Xoxo." He needn't worry about the pizza, he would just have some chips and a sandwich. And I wonder what she is going to get me for my birthday? That meeting story is baloney- at least the part about after work. I went upstairs and started doing my job- gaming. Today I played Modern Warfare 3 on PS3. It was quite a good game. I had already prestiged 6 times. Nothing like pwning noobs on my birthday! Tell me if you like it and want me to continue. It was a bit short so sorry!
Not great really. I didn't feel there was enough, and when was the last time you saw parentheses in a story or a book?
At the start you were doing it third person, then it changed to you being chris or whatever. It reminds me of my six year old brothers story about married St. Valentine who became a singer. - Don't ask - :| There is nothing that grips you or makes you want to read more. and @ king;
I don't have anything to say but where is my damnable gun! My dog CRAPS better stuff then this. For God's sake, even I write better.