Ok I failed as well... Its a great story, I'm want to read more and its got a good level of description without getting boring.
Great story. I'm not a huge fan of Vampire/werewolf stories but I must admit, this one is really good. You have good plot development and you don't over describe or under-describe things. You can get a good feel for the characters without knowing everything about them. How you write is also very good. You start off strong and know where you're going. Echo doesn't just wander around or waste time, the events follow themselves one after another. Can't wait for the next chapter.