Earth's Heroes feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Interrobang, Jan 15, 2011.

  1. Please post construtive feedback
     
  2. Post it on the story index and editors blog it helps, try paragraphing!
     
  3. Hey that's me
     
  4. I was goin do paragraphs later, this was just a warm up chapter
     
  5. Nice... Zombie friend lol good chapter
     
  6. German, can give some FEEDBACK not, hey it's me
     
  7. Bump, please read my story