Well to start it off it's about an alternate dimension filled with dwarves with a gigantic kingdom. Then some travelers get transported to the dimension and try to escape the new land. That is all I'm going to tell you. Name- Age- Gender- Race-Dwarf or Human (Dwarf only) Town job-(Blacksmith Farmer Hunter Gatherer or Miner) Personality- Appearance- (Human only) Talent-(Archer or Swordsman) (Human only) Bacpack Contents-(knife food water ect) Here is the main character Name-Sentaral Greymane Age 23 Gender-Male Race-Human Personality-Fierce arrogant and just gets his way through violence Appearance-Rugged cloak one leather glove tattered leggings and a light brown shirt Talent-Swordsman Backpack contents-One water bottle three apples and a hunting knife
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Sentaral Greymane and his companions have been mysteriously transported to a strange dimension where everyone is a dwarf. Him and his companions soon realize they need to gather materials to return to their dimension, but find themselves in a struggle to survive due to the war that is going on between the two dwarf kingdoms. They barely get out of the open fire. They find another human and he has a strange message that will change their lives forever.
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