(For my only Active Darling... stacks_of_books) She had always been unusually quiet in the eyes of the teachers. Good grades, silent,independent. Outside of the classroom she spoke loudly and was plain out weird. Kris cocked his head at her in math as she understood the complex problem Mr.Doxtater was explaining. She stood up and made muffled noises as she answered the problem. Gale was a bit to weird. She was a mathematic nerd and an outcast. Nothing new. Kris drew his eyes away from her knowing the sarcastic teacher would put him on the spot for liking her. He stated out the window and at the pretty blazing sun. "Kris." "Huh?" He looked back at the teacher and he asked again."Do you understand the problem Ms.Coyote finished?" "Can she please explain how she got her answer?" Kris asked. "Gale, would you please?" "Yes." Gale coughed and everybody heard her speak. MOAR?
I'ma let you finish, but as an experienced writer here in de forumz, I'd like to tell you: Make a feedback thread if you want to know "MOAR" or not. By the way, *cough* read Code Not Recognized *cough* *flail* *heart attack*
So the story goes on here and the feedback thread is separate? Anyway.... Update. She pushed her glasses up the bridge of her nose and went back to finishing tommorows homework. Kris was staring at her work on the paper like it was some unreadable code. Gale's hair covered most of her face except her eyes when she was working. Her hair was a interesting shade of brown with a light touch of red in it. Her violet eyes were dim as she stated that problem 13 was written incorrectly and couldn't be done. "It is possible Ms.Coyote." "Actually sir..it's not." piped up Kris sitting behind her. "Excuse me? I didn't call on you Kristopher." said Mr.Doxtater bitterly in the direction of Kris. Gale laughed silently at his name. "But it is wrong." "No it isn't." "Yes it is, unless you want -45 as your answer." she hissed. The teacher seemed overwhelmed that she was now actually speaking. "Both of you. Detention. After school. HERE." the teacher threw right back at Gale.
Ahaha, you pretty much re-created my maths lesson in my own story, but I'd like to see where you will take this story
Short update. :3 Gale was poking her best friend tanner at lunch while waiting for him to answer a problem. Kris scrunched up his nose and sneezed, startling Gale. "EEP!" She jumped and tackled Tanner to the hard ground. He put her back on her feet, and he followed standing up. "Please don't startle her," said Tanner dimly. "Sorry..."
She scrunched up her nose and he saw a glimmer of a sharp object in her mouth. Tanner ran his fingers through her warm hair. Kris wanted to look in closer at her teeth but wasn't going to try. She walked back hugging Tanners waist. Kris wanted to make him go away, as much as he wanted to, he couldn't. He felt....jealousy... Gale called Tanner loudly,making Kris feel twice as umcomfertable. "Tannurrrrr!" she said poking him and licking his face. "Aw Gale!" After school Gale called Tanner on Skype, just on the steps. "Galey Bear!" called another kid from behind her. "Erf. Carturrrr." she said putting her glasses on his face as she smiled showing her braces. She stuffed her hands in her Hetalia "China" Sweatshirt and her shark tooth necklace hung on her neck. Kris looked at her teeth and two teeth, didn't have the brackets. Her breath seemed of Icy fire in the coldening weather. Her pretty blue eyes shined in the bit of sun that shown. "CHINAAAAA!" said Sofia and Crystal in sync. "PRUSSIA AND THE POTATO EATING BASTARD!" snickered Gale. "Aw the Hetalia Gals.." muttered Carter to Kris. "KRISSY BABYY!" laughed Gale hugging him. Just two hours ago she was a huge dork and now she's a loudmouth? His face turned red at the sight of her, he thought he was on fire right about now. "H-Hi...Gale..." Gale fluffled with her hair and went back to babbling.
"Gale, Can I ask you something?" asked Kris poking her shoulder. Gale turned around hugged him. "Er..." "Do Countinue." she said. He dragged her along to a pretty tree with the water dripping off a leaf. "How come these teeth," he said opening her mouth,"don't have brackets?" he said finishing pointing to her fangs. "Because. My teeth are perfect there." "What?" "look, we know I'm not human. Your playing dumbass." she said backing him into the tree. "Look, I didn't know-" "No. You did know." "I swear Gale! I had no idea!" She licked his face and backed away slowly, whispering"Liar..."