Death of millions feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Roflcopter69, Sep 6, 2010.

  1. So if you have read my stroy death of millions please post on how much you liked it or what wa missing or if I should make anoter story and please no trolls thanks :)
     
  2. U B TROLLIN' no just kidding. i thought it was good but u should add more detail and you should definately make another 1
     
  3. Well that's not historically accurate and you need to use proper grammar. Still I liked where you were going.

    Hey, we all have to start sometime. If you want me to explain what happened I'll tell you. If you need an editor I'm sure anyone on this board will help.