Days Pass By

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by KeenaLikeABoss, Jul 14, 2011.

  1. I just randomly wrote this... 
    I haven't fully read it yet... Hope you all like it 




    Days pass by,
    Like a day dream to you,
    You look up at the sky,
    And see a shining sun.

    Days pass by,
    Like a nightmare,
    To the unlucky,
    They look up at the sky,
    And see the gates of hell waiting.

    Days pass by,
    Different to everyone,
    Never the same.

    Days pass by,
    Fast for the busy,
    The ones who have something to do,
    To keep their mind off real life.

    Days pass by,
    Slowly for the hurting,
    Slowly for the waiting,
    Slowly for the haunting.

    Days pass by,
    Different to everyone,
    Never the same.

    Days pass by,
    Horrible for those,
    That know their gonna die,
    Today.

    But that should stop,
    No more days passing by,
    Day to day,
    We should live,
    Every day like,
    It is a new journey,
    A new adventure,
    A new ride,
    A new experiance,
    Like a new day,
    And not yesterday.
     
  2. Very good  You have a few spelling errors, it's no big deal 
     
  3. Thanks okami, I'm not that good in English anyway 
    Thanks Stor 
     
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    Good job! 
     
  5. Thank-you cheesemuffin... Btw love the name haha