darkness

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by joe_, Jul 12, 2013.

  1. Darkness falls upon us all
    Suffocating
    Despair
    Anxiety
    Depression
    Fear

    Rage...

    Like a Phoenix from the ashes
    We rise again
    Anew
    Reborn

    Rekindled within our hearts
    A burning
    Yearning
    Unending flame

    The poetry of lives in motion
    Our fears
    Negated
    Our ferocity
    Unmatched

    We are unparalleled
    Because
    There is only
    We
     
  2. Very nice
     
  3. The 2nd part should be removed,
    There is no hope,
    But there is pain.
    None shall be empty,
    Only full of pain.
    None shall escape,
    The parole of life.

    REPLACE WITH THAT ^^^
     
  4. Agreed. Nice poem