This is book 1 of my second series Dark Destiny and well create characters on the other forum and give feedback at your will just don't troll !
Chapter 1- Anna and Draco After months of hesitation , Anna, whom we met in Wolf Fire's Destiny , was as determined as every . Things were looking like they could go right every minute of the day. " I really do love you Draco"said Anna more to Draco than the floor but she was staring at the floor. Months passed and even more months passed.
Chapter 2- Flashbacks As I think of it more often why is this happening to me . Who am I really? What's really going on? I've asked myself these questions 90 or more times. " why would anyone want to know the truth of it all Anna . They could use it against you"said Draco. I guess Draco's right ,maybe they can use the truth about me against me.
Chapter 3- Draco Malfoy My name is Draco Malfoy. I am 16 years old. I love Anna, whom is younger than me. But not much Is to say about me . I have been a deatheater since my father's death which was 2 weeks ago.
Chapter 4- Cinder This is my home, the Dark Forest. My parents died when i was young. I don't remember much about them. I was only two when it happened. Riddle knows i want to go back some time so he set up an ambush but because of my skill i was safe. " Stand aside silly girl and give me Cinder"said Riddle. "No not Cinder take me instead"said Alice, that's my mom. " I said stand aside !"said Riddle. " Avada Kadavra ! " said he cold voice of Riddle. As riddle came closer to me i felt and could hear my parents trying to fight him off again, but in that instant i knew they were already dead. " Avada Kadavra !"riddle's cold voice said for a third time. But instead of killing me as riddle intended to do it rebound upon him giving me this scar.
You describe 3 different characters and call the descriptions chapters. The characters are 75% stolen from Harry Potter. You write some actual handling which has nothing to do with your characters and which is again 99% stolen from Harry Potter. You use wrong grammar and too short sentences. Do us a favour: Stop posting stories and go to school
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Chapter 5- Life beyond death Even though my parents are dead i feel that they are still living beyond my reach and beyond death. Yet how is that possible i as myself. Even though they may not know their living daughter is near them . But everytime i go back i keep hearing my parents's death. Though life goes on without them i don't feel at home in the Dark Forest anymore . But knowing that it is my home and i have no place else to call home I have to continue. Then one day late in september i got a letter here is what it said on the envelope: To: Cinder , #6 , Wolf.St,The upstairs bedroom . Looking at the emerald green writing again i asked myself " But, hoe did they know". Then i open the letter and here is what it says: Dear Cinder, We are pleased to inform you that you will be starting at Stone Field School of Witchcraft and Wizardry the list of the things you will need is on the second sheet of parchment paper and good luck . I hope to see you start of term. Signed, Akita Snape, Headmistress of Stone Field School of Witchcraft and Wizardry I then unfold the second piece of parchment paper and this is what it says in red ink:Students will need: a wand and either a cat , toad, or owl . After reading the parchments i was set to get everything on my 11 birthday.
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