Hello and welcome to the CotMC feedback thread. It is a story me and Choco (SR-Candidus) are writing, we will be rotating every two chapters opposed to every chapter like FTLoC (I will write more when I'm feeling a bit less lazy) Constructive criticism PLEASE, no "OMG that was crap" stuff. ~ Paradox
Very.... Interesting. I honestly couldn't find any flaws and the soty seems pretty good by the way are all of your stories weird and eclectic like FTLoC?
No. If you go back, you can find some preeety violent ones, ask Stora for back up. This was just a silly idea that came from the ADHD conversations me and Choco have. A bit like FTLoC came from a silly conversation between me and Stora.
We have too many ADHD conversations. If I can find it, I'll post the inspiration. It's a conversation about an iDevice email glitch. And Feather being a-- you know what, never mind. I'm not posting that.
That is one heck of a main character I was grinning for the whole first chapter. But by the second chapter, for some reason I got really annoyed... Interesting concept/story so far, post more soon!
Well, I won't be as good as you. I have to write from a brat's point of view and I have to write well :/
Nuh uh. We need a person who understands monarchy at the top of the cursor kingdom. I can give you right to the throne when I die… As long as I don't get assassinated by you, a hitman or an assassin from the Assassin's guild. But maybe not, might give that honour to someone who understands monarchy.