Crucial Love 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Malicious-_-Candy (01), May 2, 2012.

  1. First time writing a story If you enjoyed it, post in my WALL. ~~ start!

    Rick is not my GUY name!! . . . Changed for security reasons!! But Keicie and Lee. Are real. DDTank server 6, on facebook. League **7Heaven** ~
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    It all started when we were playing online.. I knew you would be the perfect one. Yes I did, before you let out your true inner color.. Fights..

    ~~~ That was the intro, let's begin

    Feel like everyone hates me. Really, I know. I feel so unloved and unwanted, even that idiot has a guy that loves her and call her beautiful, perfect relationships. Me and him? Impossible. We fight almost everyday. Our fights have gravel in our voices, I don't know why, but I still love you... Idiot says, things will get better. But that idiotic slut of a motherfucker, is cheating on his husband. Dating online, with that guy. I hate that guy and that idiot. I am going to arm myself with the most painful gun, and kill them, and I will do wicked tricks behind my guy to make him love me more, have a perfect relationship...
    "Vivian?" Idiotic Keicie calls me.
    "Yes, Keicie?" I reply back. "Idiot," I mutter under my breath.
    "Guess what! My guy online, Lee, calls me beautiful and stuff! Things with you and Rick will be better!" Keicie squealed excitedly.
    "Okay," I think. "Doubt it, ARE YOU ******* KIDDING ME?" I think.

    ~~~

    Long update! But yes this is how I feel. I don't want to kill her 'tho. But, she is my best friend.  ****!!
     
  2. you're a fan of belle but actually posted this utter crap?
     
  3. It's... No comment
     
  4. No. Belle has written a story before. If you read her thread titled 'Plagiarism', you will see that she is currently working on a novel. Also, she has written part of a story titled 'The Awakening', which is somewhere around page 5 of fanfic.
     
  5. (That comment was saying that your main is NOT bellemorte, as it says on your wall.)
     
  6. 'ello Govna! Would you like a spot of tea? Or perhaps a crumpet sounds betta?
     
  7. WTH is this? I don't get it at all
     
  8. Awww yeah. Awesome story bellemorte. You also have an amazing name. Much love 