Core feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ShinigamiIchigo (01), Jul 6, 2011.

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  1. The old thread is nowhere to be seen soooooo here we go
     
    #1 *ShinigamiIchigo (01), Jul 6, 2011
  2. I LOVE CORE!
     
    #2 bellalautner, Jul 6, 2011
  3. It would be helpful to have longer posts and you could also try separating dialogue between characters.
     
    #3 *Kimber03 (01), Jul 6, 2011
  4. The reason I don't post a lot at one time is because for me it doesn't post it if the post is to long
     
    #4 *ShinigamiIchigo (01), Jul 7, 2011
  5. Then write it on notes and then copy/paste it
     
    #5 *iPimella (01), Jul 7, 2011
  6. I still have to post it
     
    #6 *ShinigamiIchigo (01), Jul 7, 2011
  7. Write more!
     
    #7 bellalautner, Jul 8, 2011
  8. Sunday was mah birthday hooray
     
    #8 *ShinigamiIchigo (01), Jul 20, 2011
  9. Happy birthday!!
     
    #9 bellalautner, Jul 20, 2011
  10. Lol thanx
     
    #10 *ShinigamiIchigo (01), Jul 20, 2011
  11. Np!
     
    #11 bellalautner, Jul 20, 2011
  12. Bump
     
    #12 *ShinigamiIchigo (01), Jul 21, 2011
  13. Tis good
     
    #13 Lady_Blue, Jul 22, 2011
  14. your story is awesome
     
    #14 *Naruto_Uzamakii (01), Jul 23, 2011
  15. Very good story, but can you try to have everything in one long post? It's kinda hard to read right now.
     
    #15 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 23, 2011
  16. I agree I have to wait too long to read another part. Other than that I love it I kinda wanna see a movie version lol.
     
    #16 *illusionzcrazy (01), Jul 28, 2011
  17. Ikr it seems like their should b a movie version
     
    #17 bellalautner, Jul 29, 2011
  18. Bump
     
    #18 *ShinigamiIchigo (01), Aug 5, 2011
  19. ི
     
    #19 *ShinigamiIchigo (01), Aug 11, 2011
  20. It's good 
     
    #20 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 12, 2011
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