Candle In the Wind FeedBack

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xXDark-Forest-ForeverXx (01), Jan 19, 2012.

  1. How do I do italics, different colors, and bold? Must ask before I post the first chapter >_<
     
  2. [bbcode=italics] Test [/italics]
    [bbcode=bold] Test [/bold]
     
  3. My friend, Nickie.......,

    Jolly good story, chap, do write more!
     
  4. Pahahah, I am! It messed up. New to phone-forums. >.<
     
  5. Wow, a true story huh?
    We don't get much of those around here. I can't really criticize it but from a general point of view as a story I would say add more description about the setting. Of course since this is a true story you don't need to but if you ever write a fictional one it would wise.
    Keep writing!
     
  6. Just found out how to indent a paragraph on my phone. XD fail much? Thank you though, Storalite. I'll be sure to add more description to the chapters to come! Hope I get a troll or two. I need some criticism. XD
     
  7. Indenting on the iPhone, you say?
     
  8. On the Android. New KaW on here and stuff, not used to it. Although its worth its weight in salt!
     
  9. Oh, Tiggy.............................
    Tell Hell I said hi.
    And check your email, I replied.
     
  10. Wow... That's really sad... R u gonna write more
     
  11. Tig hacked my account again, Pheonix? >_< I'll catch her red-handed one of these days... [/]
    Yeah, as soon as I finish the eighth Chapter, so I can put it all at once. More for my viewers/readers to have.
     
  12. Oh, yeah. She always does.
     
  13. But tell Hell/Melon I said hi anyways.
     
  14. Hahah. Ok. :p she said 'ello.
     
  15. o_O Reading. So much reading. I'll read when I get up in the morning, it's already Sunday here >.<
     
  16. Dang. You're a writer.
     
  17. Lol, thanks. Its all true, so its easy to put 2+2 together.