Bubbles

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Sep 22, 2010.

  1. Here's a new poem that I wrote! Sorry Alinktothefuter, it's not about you, I can't make one about you, I tried, but it doesn't flow.



    Bubbles

    Like a bubble I float to the sky
    I dance on the wind, have fun with my friends
    Who also float so high with me
    To tell the truth, I have no fear
    For I'm sure nothing can break my trance
    I twist, and twirl, a sphere in the air
    Never coming down, sure of myself.

    Up and up, I fly swift and sure
    The wind carries me too far
    My friends dissapear, now I am scared
    I have no control, I'm spinning to fast
    A frightening adventure, I hope will end soon,
    I get my wish, but not the way I had hoped
    For I am a bubble in the sky,
    And like a bubble I will pop.
     
  2. Post feed back below!
     
  3. Pretty good
     
  4. I know, it's not my best poem, I lost the game! 
     
  5. Rite. 
     
  6. U don't play the game do u? Oh well!
     
  7. Gimme a break aimt been om this for six
    months
     
  8. ARG!!! Why must I loose the game again?!?

    Ah well. Very nice poem, Marian.
     
  9.  sry abour the game, irin! (btw I just lost it... AGAIN!) and thanks!
     
  10. Can i sue..
     
  11. No problem.

    Oh...wait...

    I lost too...

    Grrr....
     
  12.  sry...























    Not really! 











    But seriously...