Broken: Feedback/Misc. Disscussion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jan 23, 2011.

  1. I say misc. because I'm sure I'll put a lot of unrelated stuff here. And after the...ahem...'Monkey typist incident' on the last thread...well...I'll let that speak for itself....

    Anyway, I love hearing what you guys think. So post any comments, predictions, questions, and feedback, good or bad.

    And as of...like...two weeks ago I need a character, so I though I'd ask you guys for help. If you read the last bits of the first book, Innocence, you would have read that Irin sent a young boy back to safety. So here's what I'm asking for;

    Name: Make up anything you'd like

    Gender: Has to be male. Sorry, magic can't change genders.

    Age: must be young. So...maybe between 10 and 16-ish

    Species: Elf. Unless you find a creative way to make him something else. Ex: used magic to make himself talked, but is actually a dwarf. But elf would probably be best.

    Appearance: Anything you'd like

    Personaliy: anything you'd like...again.

    Bio: We know the guy is from Arlem, we know he was fighting during the battle, and we know he was scared stiff. How did he get there? Why? Was he forced to fight? By the king? His father? Be very creative and very imaginative.

    Misc: Anything else you want me to know? Any unique traits? Again, be creative.

    I feel like I'm missing something...but anything else would go in the misc. Section. Which is Part of the reason I added that section...the other part is because I think that word is fun to say. Anyway, the more detail, the better. So feel free to add anything you want.

    So, about the bio's. Not sure how I'll be doing that. I only need one character at this point. So I might take a few parts from each bio, or I might take everything from one. We'll have to wait and see. Will I have other sign ups later? Maybe, maybe not. If I do, I'll let you guys know.

    Well, anyway, I hope y'all enjoy reading as much as I enjoyed writing!

    -Irin
     
  2. The misc could be his gift like Arabella and Irin and them have a gift and stuff
    that kinda thing :)
     
  3. Hmm...could be. It's whatever you want. Though gifts like that are rare.
     
  4. Interesting start for Book 2. Only suggestions is maybe include a link to Innocenne either here or on the story.
     
  5. Thanks. Thats Probably a good idea. I can't get on the computer though.
     
  6. Oohhhh...I want to know what gonna happen!! Nice start
     
  7. Sorry. P.S. Monkey
     
  8. Awesome! I hope it's okay that I didn't read the first book...
     
  9. Read Innocence Lady! It's not as long as it looks.
     
  10. Ehhhh... I never got through Dragon Tale, only half way and I think innocence is longer than that...
     
  11. Thanks Stora and Lady!

    It's alright kier.

    @Lady, the first one is kinda important.
     
  12. Even if the first is long, it still is a good quality of writing.
     
  13. Thankyou Star!
     
  14. Darn... I'm reluctant to read all that; maybe I'll catch on as the story goes?
     
  15. Is that the end of the prologue?
     
  16. Mysterious chapter... Never stop your writing Irin!
     
  17. Thanks star! 

    Yep, end of prolouge. But I really do suggest readding the first book, though I won't force you.
     
  18. Very nice Irin! You really know how to make mysterious posts!
     
  19. Thanks Stora!
     
  20. Can I make the boy character?