Being a secret service agent is hard work. First and most important, you have to protect the president with your life, second you have to stand and wait for countless hours, and finally, you have to deal with the **** high up gives you if you fail to take a bullet for the president. Today will be rough. Today the president gives a speech in LA, and we have sources that say there will be an assassination attempt there. "Another day in paradise." I thought as I put on my suit. All of a sudden my alarm clock buzzed. 7:15, time to head out. On my way to the white house, I stopped for a cup of joe. ... "Good Morning, Mr. President" "Good Morning, Charles" I lead the president to the car and drive him to Air Force One. ... An hour after we got off the plane, the president was giving his speech. A crowd of thousands stood before me. All the windows seem clear. I go to my radio "All cl..." Thats how far I make it before the bullet pierces my chest. Why would someone want to kill me? End of Story One
I support that you are at least trying and that you are pretty active, however ff is full of bullies so it will be tough for you and you will get tons of negative commments
Caine. Angel isn't your friend, trust me. He lies. Alot. I'm going to post some feedback, one second.
Little more description, explain what he does in preparation of getting up in the morning. I.e. tying the tie, dressed, showering. Also make it a little longer. It's fairly short. And a question: Is this all of Story One, or Act One? (Sorry, bad memory, can't remember what you said there.: