BREACH 2: Through the Killer's Eyes

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by King_Caine, May 1, 2013.

  1. "Yes sir I am aware of my current mission." The assassin said.
    "Goods I aints payins you to do shits work" the mystery man said "How do I know you wont **** me over in the end?"
    "You have no choice but to trust me." The assassin said as he walked away not bothering to close the door behind him.
    Just have to make a few stops, he thought.
    He turned on the radio.
    "...and the president is just about to come up..."
    He quickly shut it off
    "****!" He said as he pulled a full U-turn
    He quickly drove to the Marriott, where he was going to kill the other man that ****** over the gang. That secret service agent...

    He walked into the Marriott "hello, I would like to rent a room for the night."
    "Alright, can I see some ID?"
    "Sure." He said as he pulled out his wallet and reached for his ID.
    ***** I got no time for you! He thought angrily.
    "Alright it's $70 a night and here is your room key."
    "Thanks!"
    He ran quickly upstairs.
    Went to his room and aimed the gun at the target.
    Bam!
    One Shot
    One Target
    One Life
    One Death
    Whose death?
    The man's

    End of Book 2
     
  2. RATED 16 for strong language
     
  3. more of a..meh.
     
  4. Better or worse than the other?
     
  5. Slightly better :|
     
  6. 3rd one in the works. Comes out tomorrow or next day. It will be longer