Bluejays-Poetry Thread

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Mr_Bluejay, Nov 19, 2010.

  1. Ok this is a collection of poetry I have written lately. Feel free to comment on this thread whether u like it or not. I will add more poems as regular posts so  keep an eye out lol thanks 

    Well, 
    things are dark at the moment, 
    and I don't know what to do, 
    I'm angry with myself, 
    The sky has lost it's shade of blue.
    Replaced by black,
    A black that swallows me at night,
    Chilling my bones,
    Causing me fright.
    I never asked for this, 
    But it's bestowed upon me,
    Like a gift at christmas, 
    One I want away from me.
    I feel like such an outcast, 
    Thrown out into the streets.
    A cruel harsh world is what I deserve, 
    I'll get no love or respect.
    Quite right to,
    I Ruined my life,
    But I don't know how,
    I only know that I'm to blame.
    No one else,
    Should feel this pain.
     



    Its only a sickness,
    I wont get over it soon,
    It'll take until the stars fall out of the sky,
    And until the sun itself stops to ask why,
    I'm ashamed and terrified of what I've become, 
    I am below a common beggar, 
    Nothing but a lonely bum, 
    It's taking over,
    Controlling every aspect, 
    Of this life that was once mine,
    I control my reactions,
    But not my situation, 
    And it's always the hard ones that happen around me, 
    The ones I despise,
    That make me feel insignificant,
    I'm ashamed to say it, 
    But I feel I've lost all hope, 
    There is no god, 
    No wizard in the sky, 
    I have grown to hate this figure with a passion, 
    No need to ask why, 
    When I get up tomorrow, 
    And head out into the world, 
    I shall know that one thing is true,
    The world is but a cloud of dark blue,
    One that I there for no other purpose,
    Then to ruin me, 
    I didn't ask for this,
    But yet it was bestowed upon me, 
    My life in turmoil,
    I have but one thing to say,
    Prepare for tomorrow, 
    Be done with yesterday.




    Stupid world 
    Such a pain 
    You drive me crazy
    Almost insane
    Pointless fights 
    They never end
    Restless nights 
    Do I know have to contend 
    Would you act this way
    Talk to me like this 
    If you knew the price I always pay 
    Your the lucky ones 
    The ones that get to miss 
    The pain
    And anger given 
    By your bickering sprees 





    There's a girl I know,
    She stolen my heart,
    And won't give it back.
    I'll let her keep it,
    Anything for her happiness,
    It's great to see her smile.
    I love her so much,
    So as the old poem goes,
    Roses are red,
    Violets are blue,
    She's my everything,
    And im glad of It to.





    The code

    The world an uninterpretable code,
    Humanity one of greater magnitude.
    The reason of life, 
    If a reason exists, 
    Is clouded to me, 
    If not all others.
    The reason the sky is blue,
    and the reason that reason is correct, 
    Has no relevance to me,
    The earth is here and so are we,
    This little ball of blue and green,
    in a sea of stars. 






    Birthday time:

    Once a year it comes, 
    Bringing surprise,
    And unexpected moments.
    What will it be this year?
    A hug?
    An old friend come to visit? 
    Or maybe something more.
    It's mysterious,
    And unexplainably exciting.
    So as it's your birthday,
     I wanted to say,
    Have an awesome time, 
    And make it a special day.







    To dance along the wings of angels,
    To feel the see breeze on my face,
    To see the world through closed eyes, but a wide open heart.

    To be with you every day,
    You never leave my side,
    I'll fight for you yes I will,
    And never let you go.

    I'll stay one point ahead of the game,
    Anything to keep you safe, 
    When things look bleak I'll protect you,
    And keep you in my heart.

    To never let you leave I hope, 
    Is what I shall endeavour, 
    But even if you leave my life,
    You won't be gone forever.

    I'll search under every rock to find you,
    Your sweet voice calling me, 
    I will never part from you my love, 
    And I hope you feel the same.

    But even if u deny me your love forever,
    I will prove myself, 
    A hopeless cause it may be,
    But one that must be fought.

    To dance upon the wings of angels,
     is what I wish to do,
    To spend my life eternally,
    Eternally with you.







    We were walking,
    Dragging unresponsive bodies,
    Toward a haven,
    we were never to reach.
    Our throbbing limbs,
    And senseless minds.
    Drunk with fatigue,
    Stumbling at every hurdle.
    The blood splattered faces all around,
    Identical to one another.
    But blind to all,
    And deaf to all.
    A unit, 
    Was how we were once described,
    But left as empty shells,
    The mindless drones of our superiors.
    Our twisted flesh and heavy boots,
    Dragging us down.
    Our own souls pulling free of our bodies,
    Sick of bodily form.
    But wishing to leave this human form,
    And soon to take another.
    The young men once recruited,
    Now hardened veterans,
    The army that stood their once, 
    Is now a human killing force






    The Thinkers Ocean:

    The hidden thoughts,
    Secluded to all but the thinker,
    Tormenting his brain,
    with the knowledge that no one else has.
    But kept a secret it must be, 
    For his sanity and those around him.
    Confused,
    Scared,
    He stumbles around in the dark.
    Never stopping,
    Never letting people in.
    The thoughts returning,
    Always returning. 
    Picking away at his soul,
    Leaving him a barren vessel,
    An automaton for the control of others.
    If only he'd spoken out before,
    But now he is washed away,
    By the tide of life,
    Without the knowledge of how to swim.






    The lights,
    The stage,
    The call of action.

    The anger that comes,
    When the director shouts, 
    Cut!!!!

    What went wrong?
    What did I do?
    When infact it was only time for lunch.

    All the time we put in,
    Comes out to you, 
    A little distorted,
    Over the big screen.

    They say "it's only for money,"
    But it is just a job,
    Do you get stick,
    For whatever you do?







    The first kiss:

    Unexpected,
    Unprepared,
    Just an urge to show I loved you.

    Brush away your hair,
    And lean towards you,
    Then we kissed.

    It was strange,
    But amazing,
    All in the same moment.

    I still ask myself,
    How I got the courage up,
    And I have no simple answer.

    Maybe it was fate,
    Or just amazing timing,
    That put me in a position with you.

    I still can't believe your mine,
    But I'm glad you are,
    More glad then you could ever know.

    In that moment the world seemed right,
    And I hope it was with you as well, 
    My amazing love.

    Sorry about this crappy poem,
    But I couldn't think of anything else,
    If it was my choice I'd do it again now.

    But I don't have that chance,
    So this is the best that I can do,
    A poem for you,
    A poem for love.







    The dark,
    The cold,
    It shakes my bones,
    Scaring me of my own existence.

    The battle,
    Like a raging storm above my head,
    Drowning out my broken screams,
    With the uttering of gunfire.

    A broken soul,
    With broken body,
    A loss of hope, 
    With lack of faith.

    My thoughts they blurred,
    But on one I focused,
    The thought of my children,
    Soon to be fatherless.

    Would they wail?
    Or would they cry?
    At the news of my departure.
    Or maybe they would not care...

    The world began to dim before me,
    Swallowing the commotion all around.
    And all I could do was wait helplessly,
    Never being able to say goodbye.

    The time had come,
    My song is ended,
    It was time to leave never to return,
    To the place I once called home.

    My eyes fell heavy,
    And I tried to fight against it,
    But they shut.
    Never again to open.







    I'll hide you from the cold
    Shelter you from the storm 
    I'll keep you safe forever and ever

    I'm there for you
    And you for me
    I hope it'll be that way forever and ever

    People can knock us down
    Be rude and obnoxious 
    But I'm here for you forever and ever

    When I see you face 
    Mine lights up
    And surprisingly yours does too

    If anyone were to hurt you
    I'd hunt them down
    That's what I'll do

    You do so much for me
    I just try to repay the favour
    But I can't 

    All I give is my love
    A love that will never die
    The love of you just the way you are

    I don't think I'll need to protect you 
    But I'm here if needs be 
    Because I love you 
    And I'll never let you go






    Your smile 
    Your touch 
    All these things mean so much to me

    We are kept apart 
    Though by no one 
    The times we have together are cherished forever

    And when I see you
    I can only stop and stare
    To your love and kindness none compare

    So I'm writing this poem
    Not a letter or note
    To say that your amazing much better then most

    A friend at first 
    Then even more
    Everything about you I adore

    Things they change
    They come and go
    But my feelings toward you will never know

    I'm ending now but I want you to know 
    Your the one for me 
    And that I know
     
  2. lol no one actuly posted 
     
  3. ok lol ....
     
  4. I went to the shop. And bought a mop. To wipe my shoe. That was full of poo. I went to the sea, To get a cup of tea. And I saw a bee Which made me flee. Check it. You never want to mess with it. This poem is the best so don't be a pest. This is bluedays thread. But his poem is already dead. His rhymes were too weak. Or you could say bleak. So be a good boy. And get me a new toy!
     
  5. Lol that's really good
     
  6. Lmbo
     
  7. Have you ever felt the silence? 
    When the noise is all around?
    Have you ever felt the silence? 
    While heavy boots beat upon the ground?
    Have you ever felt the silence?
    In the echoes of the night? 
    Have you ever felt the silence? 
    that gives the children fright? 
    Silence is the memory of long forgotten days, 
    Another empty book.
    And another empty page.
    You are powerless against it, 
    but the fight it struggles on. 
    Wrestling a deadly foe,
    In the silence of it all.
     
  8. Oooohhhh... Your theblade. YAY!!!!
     
  9. I feel lame being the only one to actually compliment you XP but seriously they were pretty good!! Lol.
     
  10. Thanks the fc version of this has more life lol I need to post a few more I've written lol
     
  11. I just think that it's because most people don't know how to read poetry. I'm sorry to give your poems titles, but I'm just doing it as a way to reference them.

    To dance along the wings of angels

    - great, very descriptive, full of emotion

    When the director shouts

    (loved it)

    Have you ever felt the silence

    Great use of repetition! Again, very good, and it's great to see you using different styles.
     
  12. Thanks give me a second I have alot more I wrote since this was posted
     
  13. The lone man

    One lone man walking down the street,
    Not noticed by others,
    As he trudged around on heavy feet.
    Alone, forgotten and unremembered,
    The people disregard him,
    Because they know not his temper.
    They do not notice his tormented soul,
    They are oblivious to him as if he's just a pole.
    He tries to get noticed,
    Do something different,
    But to no avail,
    What did he do?
    Whatever it was it's a sour truth he has to chew.





    What if?

    What if one day,
    The birds stop singing?
    What if one day,
    The bells stop ringing?
    The light fades?
    And darkness consumes all? 
    The long legged strides of legacy,
    Are lost to the modern ideals of how we live.
    The last point made I'm afraid to say, 
    Is coming true. 
    The world is changing,
    And the men and women must adapt.
    Lack of preparation is a crime in times like this. 
    But we stand as still as stone as the world goes bye.
    And wonder where we left off?
    As we rotate in on motionless planet in the middle of space.






    The telescope

    A viewing platform for the universe,
    A way to see,
    The places men will never traverse.
    Men they watch and long to be,
    Surrounded by the galaxy 
    And the stars therein.
    The darkness captivating, 
    The cold excruciating.
    This is of course but an assumption,
    For I have never travelled outside the solar system,
    And never wish to.
    But the telescope it stands there,
    Always working, ever faithful.
    Willing to show me the places I cannot go.
    But that I dream of so.
     
  14. Again great! Lol. Personally I liked the telescope best even though I'm a stickler for ryhming haha
     
  15. Way to long

    I didn't read it at all
     
  16. Too**

    And iLol @ u