This is my first time writing in KaW, and I am doing it from a phone. I'll do my best to keep the story flowing, but I don't have gobs of time to sit and write. This first part will just be a short intro, and depending on the feed back I may or may not continue writing. Hope you enjoy, Fritz Prologue "Curse you, you fat pig!" Jack rolled in the dirt to avoid the hoof of the huge boar towering above him. Jack pushed himself off the ground and took a moment to get his bearings. He was only vaguely aware of the roar of the crowd as he looked around the all too familiar arena. For six months he'd been trapped here, fighting countless beasts captured during the Blood Moon. But nothing had been so challenging as this! Jack groped for his sword and swung at the monstrosity, slicing a hunk of flesh off its side. It turned and again sent him flying, prompting a string of profanity and an explosion of noise from the crowds. The beast charged Jack, but before it could trample him, every living thing in the arena stopped to look at the sky. The blood moon has risen again.
Dude this is good (For a second I thought you where right in about someone fighting EB monsters) it would be cool if it was blood rains, but blood moon is awesome too!
It looks like I got some good feedback so I'll keep writing. This will be another short Chapter because I don't have a ton of time. I promise they'll get longer. CHAPTER 1 Jack was speechless. Another blood moon? The next one wasn't due for another decade! Just then, the boar's mournful howl tore Jack from his trance. The boar thrashed about and began to lose its more frightening features. It shrank to the size of any other pig and proceeded to fall over, dead. By now, the crowd was in chaos. Everyone was running to the exits. Before long, only a few stragglers remained. The blood moon flashed blindingly and a bone-chilling war call filled the air. Five ghostly pale men- if you could call them that- leaped down from the upper stands of the arena. All of them wore gladiator garb. Jack readied his sword, and the tallest one leapt towards him, howling. Jack parried, sidestepped, and feinted. The creature foresaw each and every one of his moves and steadily pushed him back into the wall of the arena. The thing sliced at Jack and cut a gash in his side. "Augh!" Jack had just one final gambit. He reached out with his left hand and grabbed the blade of the atrocity and yanked it out of its hands. Stunned, it couldn't react fast enough and Jack sliced its head off. Alas, this victory changed nothing for Jack. Clutching his hand and side, he waited for death. But none came. The creature he had beheaded came before him and knelt down before him. "We are at your service, champion." CHAPTER END Does any one know who these mysterious beings are? Be sure to reply!