"Blood-Limit" Feedback and Discussion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Nlaz, Jan 26, 2011.

  1. Yeah... This is the feedback thread. Tell me the pros and cons of the chapters/stories please. That'll be very helpful. Feel free to ask any questions about the story as well. Thanks!

    iZaln
     
  2. Chapter 1 is up. (this is the better thread)

    iZaln
     
  3. Very good (a bit early tho don't ya think)
     
  4. Nice now write more!
     
  5. @GI
    It was b4 I left fo school lol.

    @Stora
    Chapter 2 will be up either tonight or tomorrow morning.

    iZaln
     
  6. Awesome first chapter! I expect more soon! (I'm such a hypocrite asking others to write but not writing myself... )
     
  7. Great job! I'm intrested to see how he handles his first kill, or if he avoids it. Moar soon please!
     
  8. Just posted Chapter 2... Rather quickly in my opinion, lmao. Your wishes were granted quickly :D

    iZaln
     
  9. Yea! Great job Zaln
     
  10. Intresting turn of events. Great job!
     
  11. Can you pretty please post more?
     
  12. LETS GO JENNICA LET'S GO!
     
  13. Zaln I made a story about you 
     
  14. Good job man hey if I noticed that few of sign ups had something to do with sight/enhanced senses, so if u wanna change mine so it's not the same with some ppl, u could
     
  15. @Gloomi
    So I read... .

    @German
    Ahh bro, I believe you are one of my closest buddies. And maybe I will, maybe not. Haven't gotten that far yet :p

    iZ
     
  16. More? Ahh...

    iZaln