He raised his sword ice was everywhere, The girl gasped as the Hollow disappeared. As the girl turned to see who it was she saw a boy not much older than she was. " Toshiro!" the girl ran crying to him. " Momo!" Toshiro exclaimed as she ran in his arms. As they embraced swords clashed in the forest Renji was battling a Menos Grande as he was flung away like a rag doll he noticed cherry blossoms flying around him. " Scatter, SenBonSakura" the menos grande instantly disappeared " I'm sorry Captian" Renji said with his head bowed then Rukia jumped behind Byakuya " Renji " she exclaimed she ran in his arms. " Lets go home Rukia" Byakuya offered. Meanwhile in the Human world Ichigo Kurosaki was losing his soul reaper powers slowly his friends tried to lift his spirits but he never seemed happy. That month a new transfer student came to his school she had raven black hair like Yurdoichi she actually looked like a high school version of Yurdoichi. "Ichigo" his teacher said " The new girl will sit next to you" " uh ok " Ichigo said groggily then later that day all of his friends were at Udaharras shop " Everyone I have an annoucment " Yurdoichi said " My niece is visiting from the Soul Society" the girl from Ichigos school stepped shyly out " Hello" she said. Orrihime stared at her almost like she was trying to read her thoughts. Orrihime thought to herself "she better not like Ichigo, He's mine!" If you want me to write more or continue plz reply CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM and comments are welcome you can also wall me
Paragraphs. New line for speech, they kinda go together because one big block of text is too hard to read. No need to add spaces with speech marks e.g you go " uh ok " but most other people go "uh ok"
Thxs 4 reading ppl I hope u continue to read it I'm writing the 2nd part on thus forum so it won't get confused
Bleach Fan Fiction part 2 "Hello, My name is Amehime" The girl said shyly "Hi!" Orrihime said joyful " Welcome" Chad said. "so you are losing your soul reaper powers?" Amehime asked Ichigo " uh..Yeah" He said queitly " Anyone want tea?" Udaharra asked a little to enthusiastically. Then Yurdoichi and Amehime instantly perked up " Hollow!" they both said " Ichigo you stay here!" Amehime said " I'm not handicapped!" Ichigo shouted Amehime disappeared " Uh Ichigo I have to tell you something." Orrihime whispered "Hm" Ichigo said " I...I love" before Orrihime could finish Ichigo saw a figure in the window glass shattered around their feet Orrihime screamed and a figure stepped out of the smoke " Hello Ichigo." It was Grimmjow Jaggerjaques. "I thought... You are supposed to be dead!" Ichigo stuttered " Aww that's no way to greet an old friend" Grimmjow said smirking " all your friends are gone they fell for the trap except Orrihime" " What trap" Ichigo said desperation in his eyes he had let his friends down. " well since your here they went to fight... The Top Ten Espadas. and yes they weren't killed they were just fake dummies that we created we are ten times more powerful!" Grimmjow said yowling with laughter. " Oh no" Orrihime murmured Ichigos eyes were wide with shock "You monster!" he screamed " BANKAI!" He heard Orrihime in the background screaming "Ichigo don't!" then he heard Grimmjow " just like the last time we battled Ichigo Kurosaki, but this time I will win!" Meanwhile Amehime and Yurdoichi had no idea what was in store for them as they approached the so called hollow sighting 10 Espadas stood in a perfect line. " Impossible" Yurdoichi murmured in awe. " Welcome" A tall man with a goatee said a small blonde girl came up behind him " Coyote Stark and Lilliette" Amehime said " oh the girl knows us were celebrities " Coyote Stark said jokingly Then a shield went around all of the Espadas and Yurdoichi and Amehime " This shield will make sure no interferes with our fight" Ulquerria said " Well what are you all waiting for you get first hit" In the Soul Society alarms were going crazy as if the world had caught on fire. "We have 10 Immense amounts of spiritual pressure." Mayuri announced as the Captains assembled for an emergency meeting " we also have 2 equal amounts of spiritual pressure, Those two are Yurdoichi and her niece Amehime." A diffrent captiand voice cut in it was The new Captian Momo Hinamori of 5th squad " We should send reinforcements" " We can there seems to be a aura blocking the battle scene" Mayuri said " It is quite simple in fact if we." Mayuri was cut off by Izuru Captian of 3rd squad " we can't risk losing more soul reapers" " I agree" Hisagi said " No action will be required, patrol the area as usual " Head Captian Yammamoto said " Dismissed" As the captians scurried back to their barracks trouble was brewing ( as usual) in the World of the Living Ichigo raced desperately to the scene where Yoruichi and Amehime were " Yoruichi!, Amehime!" Ichigo screamed but he could do nothing but watch his new friend and mentor die before his eyes. On the other hand Orrihime ws surprised and anxious to see if Amehime was even a good fighter. " Uh Ichigo" Orrihime said " I love" then a loud explosion came out of no where and then the battle had begun and Orrihime again had to wait to talk to Ichigo Plz comment 3rd part will b made soon
BRING GIN BACK TO LIFE!! (if grimmjow can be brought back to life, so can gin-kun) It's Ulquoirra not Ulquerria
Bleach Fan Fiction part 3 "SHUNKO" Yoruichi yowled spiritual pressure surrounded her as Yoruichi attempted to take on Notoria, Amehime had her own issues she pulled out her zanpakto and faced off with Yammy. Orrihime remembered when Yammy slapped her and Ichigo had to protect her " Ichigo" she thought her face turned red and she had to turn around. In battle Amehime was actually holding her own she clashed swords with Yammy and she was slowly beginning to weaken. Ichigo watched as Amehime tried to dodge Yammy's blows but she was weakening in front of his eyes. "Amehime don't give up!" Ichigo cried out she turned her brown eyes locking on to him replied " what do you think I'm doing!" but precious seconds were wasted when she turned. When she turned back to Yammy she saw his fist, Amehime was sent flying across the shield she slammed into the edge where Ichigo was he heard bones snapping her eyes wide with fear blood came out of her mouth. " Amehime!" Yoruichi yowled as she saw Yammy advance on her she tried to run to protect her but Notoria stopped her. Everyone watched helplessly as the newcomer was about to be killed and Ichigo and Orrihime had front row seats. Ichigo could've held her hand that's how close she was her hair was messy and out of it's bun her clothes were tattered from hours of dueling as the final blow cane forward Amehime everything seemed to go in slow motion. Amehime was in her internal world it was empty nothing in it but a blue haired boy " Hello I'm your zanpakto as you know I'm Misoyo" "We can't lose kill the Espada for all of your friends" as his voice faded Amehime regained conciseness. Blue Spiritual pressure surrounded her Yammy looked shocked. Ichigo and Orrihime were overjoyed Amehime had renewed strength as she slashed Yammy she saw a opening in the shield she flipped over Yammy and sliced the opening and at first nothing happened the the ehole shield deflated like a balloon. After the shield was split open the Espadas retreated and Amehime collapsed Ichigo carried her back to the Udaharra shop and a note was on the door it read " This is not over"-Espadas Plz comment happy there r paragraphs plz actually comment on what u guys like thxs
Bleach Fan Fiction part 4 " Is she dead?" Kon asked " NO!" Ichigo said as he laid Amehime gently his bed as Ichigo laid Amehime in bed Karin and Yuzu his younger twin sister popped in along with his dad " Ichigo" His dad said " Is that your uh.. Girlfriend?" " Yeah Ichigo is she your girlfriend,because I thought you were dating Orrihime" Karin and Yuzu said simultaneously. " WHA..NO!, I mean no I'm not dating Orrihime or Amehime jeez you guys." " oh ok" Karin and Yuzu said as they exited " Sure Ichigo" his dad said as he left. Just when Ichigos dad left Orrihime ran in "Hi Ichigo!" she said cheerily " oh hey" Ichigo said still feeling Amehime's forehead for her temperature " Uh..... Ichigo" " I love you." Orrihime said in almost a whisper ".....uh" Ichigo replied his face all red she leaned in and kissed him on the cheek. "Uh..." Ichigo mumbled his face getting redder. Orrihime giggled and ran out of the room "Hey,Ichigo" a voice said " Who said that?" Ichigo said " Me" the voice sounded a little weaker " Amehime your awake." Ichigo said " Here stay still he grabbed a wet cloth and put it on her forehead. His brown eyes softened up when he saw how sick Amehime was. Her black hair was out of it's ponytail her face was drenched in sweat. Her temperature was higher than usual. Ichigos eyes widen he picked her up in his arms. She was surprisingly extremely light he thought. " Dad I'm going Udaharras" Ichigo shouted " ok be safe" his dad yelled after him. Then Ichigo walked into the rain to walk to Udaharras shop he wrapped a blanket around Amehime Plz comment