Bleach Fan Fiction Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by bellalautner, Jun 28, 2011.

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  1. Idk where the other 1 is lol and if u r reading this shut up feather
    Plz only comment if u read my bleach fan fiction
     
    #1 bellalautner, Jun 28, 2011
  2. You make me think about bleach to much I just got bleach shattered blades. it's really awesome story Bella but what you gonna do when shonen or some pike that reads it and ask you to right manga
     
    #2 Ichigo2Kurosaki, Jun 28, 2011
  3. Idk thxs for ur support but I dint think they will if they read I would b honored r u from shonen jump lol?
    And thxs for ur super sweet comments ur the reason 4 all my new ideas ur the best!
     
    #3 bellalautner, Jun 28, 2011
  4. Is it the name;)
     
    #4 Ichigo2Kurosaki, Jun 29, 2011
  5. Wow. I would like to see the looks on the others faces when they see another feedback thread!
     
    #5 FeatherHunter, Jun 29, 2011
  6. If you could see our faces... It would be creepy.

    Mine looked something like this

    
     
    #6 *iPimella (01), Jun 29, 2011
  7. She has two famous enemies, me and you.
     
    #7 FeatherHunter, Jun 29, 2011
  8. I feel so special.

    I have an arch nemesis!
     
    #8 *iPimella (01), Jun 29, 2011
  9. this is harassment get of my forum feather if u don't u will b reported!
     
    #9 bellalautner, Jun 29, 2011
  10. Oh god lol, this argument is hilarious.

    And it isn't really classed as harassment. More irritating ;)
     
    #10 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jun 29, 2011
  11. Wow 2 children fighting against one girl real mature guys why don't you go get a job or a gf and stop blowing each other
     
    #11 Ichigo2Kurosaki, Jun 30, 2011
  12. Umm so anyone else besides Ichigo read my story?
     
    #12 bellalautner, Jul 2, 2011
  13. Aww bella and ichigo love eachother XP
     
    #13 Maisaka, Jul 2, 2011
  14. @Ichigo
    Don't mess with iPimella, FeatherHunter, and QueenBayleen or you're in some big shizz.

    @Bella
    Great story. Great concept. You spelled the names correctly. If you have the chapters saved on an app (like Notes or something), I would go ahead and make a new story thread and new title for it. The story is nice but just a few grammatical tweaks (your sis might be able to help) and some paragraph spacing and it'd be a really good story. So three main things:

    •New thread and title. (too many extras in the last one.)
    •Fix and go over grammar.
    •Add spacing between paragraphs.

    Otherwise you have a good load of chapters and an interesting plot.

    iZaln

    iPS. I've got my eye on you, Ichigo2Kurosaki 
     
    #14 Nlaz, Jul 2, 2011
  15. @RoxasLoverForever
    Such a supportive sister xD

    iZaln
     
    #15 Nlaz, Jul 2, 2011
  16. ikr thxs 4 posting guys I will take ur comments and try 2 use them
     
    #16 bellalautner, Jul 2, 2011
  17. thxs 4 the comment sis
     
    #17 bellalautner, Jul 2, 2011
  18. ....anyone else care 2 comment
     
    #18 bellalautner, Jul 4, 2011
  19. Lol Izaln! I can't just say it sucks, it's a great story! I think ichigo is protective over bella :p
    Where is her bleach story....?
    Bella is currently creating a naruto fan fiction:) be patient
     
    #19 Maisaka, Jul 4, 2011
  20. .....??
     
    #20 bellalautner, Jul 4, 2011
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