blackout feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ghosto745 (01), May 26, 2011.

  1. Feedback for blackout tell me if you like
     
  2. Oh and by the way who wants to be in my stroy
     
  3. Sorry not stroy story
     
  4. That's an awesome story so far! And put me in it and give me a cool name... Like a code name! Lol
     
  5. Who else wants to be in my story
     
  6. It's good so far
     
  7. Stop bumping the story! Make new chapters that will bump it, thus satisfying the readers a little.
     
  8. Hey I need more people for th next chapter
     
  9. New chapters out
     
  10. Lol here is a person

    Name is: Patrick g. Fin
    Bio: he happens to be running back to his house when he was hit by an arrow-.- he always has his scythe with him... Oh yea, he killed his father five years ago in hope to get the family gauntlets(has them) he is a 15 year old boy who in fact never talks much after his oath on his fathers grave. Split Personalities and talks with a note pad and pen.
     
  11. Fit him in somehow-.-
    And if I may help? I just need some one for gramatic errors
     
  12. Wait his name is "Frau"
     
  13. Allright two people can write next chapter