Battle camp: The Rescue feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Oct 8, 2010.

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  1. Post feedback on my third book, Battle camp: the rescue here. Constructive criticism welcom!
     
    #1 *lady-marian (01), Oct 8, 2010
  2. Oh **** i love symphoney
     
    #2 german_idiot, Oct 8, 2010
  3. GO LADY MARIAN!!!!!
    and Wolf
     
    #3 Fangedwolf, Oct 8, 2010
  4. FINALLY WOLF KILLED SOMEONE sry Marian
     
    #4 Fangedwolf, Oct 8, 2010
  5. I love symphoney cause she's my gf (not in book in rl but same person)...but she's a heartthrob -honest feedback
     
    #5 TJ_Wolfsbane, Oct 8, 2010
  6. Lololololol!!! Thanks for all the feedback!
     
    #6 *lady-marian (01), Oct 8, 2010
  7. Wolf don't like no one. But I'm open to MARIANS ideas only.
     
    #7 Fangedwolf, Oct 8, 2010
  8. Actually wolf like someone...
     
    #8 *lady-marian (01), Oct 8, 2010
  9. Okay
     
    #9 Fangedwolf, Oct 8, 2010
  10. I'm not sure who yet... Maybe not.. Ok he might not like anyone...
     
    #10 *lady-marian (01), Oct 8, 2010
  11. Ok
     
    #11 Fangedwolf, Oct 8, 2010
  12. If he likes anyone, just use someone from the rebellion like cassie or somethin'.
     
    #12 Fangedwolf, Oct 8, 2010
  13. I is go sleep... 
     
    #13 *lady-marian (01), Oct 8, 2010
  14. I love it!!
     
    #14 *Symphoney (01), Oct 8, 2010
  15. Thanks
     
    #15 *lady-marian (01), Oct 8, 2010
  16. Wall me please lady
     
    #16 *Symphoney (01), Oct 8, 2010
  17. Ok
     
    #17 *lady-marian (01), Oct 8, 2010
  18. Lady you have real talent.
     
    #18 *Ipitydahooka (01), Oct 8, 2010
  19. Yes she does
     
    #19 *Symphoney (01), Oct 8, 2010
  20. I concur
     
    #20 *cheddarman7 (01), Oct 8, 2010
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