Battle camp: the rebellion, how can I improve?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Aug 21, 2010.

  1. Hi it's me! You may be familiar with my story, battle camp: the rebellion. This thread is all about how I can improve my story. Do I have too many characters? Too few? Should they interact more? More dialoug? Don't be afraid to be harsh on me, I just want to improve!
     
  2. Hi i'm the onwer of your fan club for the story
     
  3. My story needs a fanclub



    And I need 1 to
     
  4. Isn't this what ur feedback thread is for?
     
  5. I'll make a demon chronicles fan club!
     
  6. Lol utho and yes