Battle camp: the rebelion feedback!

Pretty good so far, but it kinda posted weird.

 

Ok a few errors I like the idea on the whole but it can get confusing if you continue this kind of story

 

Continue it it was awsome

 

It was awesome, but there were alot of spelling errors.

 

Remember to take your time. Sometimes it's fun to see people begging for more.

 

awesome job

 

Awesome job! Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work!

 

If ww supports it I'm in for the next chapter need any help wall me

 

Check out the "Things to Check Out" thread. They really liked your story, and posted a review on it!

 

Your welcome

 

I LOVE IT!

 

Nice story














Can I have a character?

 

Never min about the character



Ideally love the story plz write on