Prologue: Faraway from the kingdom of Kinatia, storm clouds hover above the world's strongest kingdom, Vyctin. The death of the King marks the death of his fair rule, and now poses a threat to other Kingdoms. Rebels among the Vyctin army took over with surprising speed. The Crown Princess Katelyn was murdered in her sleep. Lightning struck as the rebels eliminated the last of the resistance. By the time this news reached the ears of the neighboring Kingdom Moetel directly east of Vyctin, the army of Vyctin had already amassed at the border, ready to attack. The ground itself seemed to me shaking as the army charged, and the villages seemed to disintegrate. This. This was the beginning of a long war, one that would bleed all the countries dry. The future of the world lay in the army of Kinatia. More specifically, the four legendary fighters in Kinatia. (Should I continue this?)
Chapter 1: (Moetel's capital) "Damn the people of Vyctin.", said King Spencer, in plain outrage. He turned to his army general. "Gather our army. We will send them back where they came from" "Of course, your Majesty", replied the general, and he hurried off. Silence descended in the throne room, followed by the sound of smashing glass as King Spencer kicked a table over. (Kinatia's capital) Queen Grace, ruler of Kinatia, paced back and forth in her palace's throne room. Assembled before her were the nobles and higher ranked army officers. "As you may know, Vyctin's army is on the move, attacking kingdoms", the queen said. "We will not simply watch. General Daniel, gather the soldiers in the country. General Paulina, gather our four champions." The two generals nodded and rushed to carry out those orders. The queen continued, "As for the rest of you, gather all the troops, weapons and mounts that you can muster from your feudal territories." The nobles bowed and left. Queen Grace proceeded to the palace armories. There, she picked up her bow and quiver of arrows, and her sword. Shields and armor were more of a nuisance than helpful things, she thought. (Vyctin's capital) The rebel leader, Darian, laughed harshly when he heard that Moetel and Kinatia declared war on Vyctin. Already, he had conquered the Kingdoms of Araviq and Flurov. He laughed again. He was beyond reason. The Devil of ancient times has returned. [how do you guys like it?]
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Chapter 2: (The Devil of Ancient Times) Centuries ago, a demon from the deepest corner of Hell climbed into the human world, draping it in chaos, confusion and fear. It had a vast army of demons. Monsters that everyone feared. One day, the demon withdrew for reasons unknown. Peace returned and life resumed its normal course. Little did the humans know that the Devil had developed a new power. Possession. The first target of this power was Emperor Dillan of Hikon, a Kingdom well known for their battle skills. Dillan proceeded to conquer the entire world. Less than a year later, Heaven sent a blessing to mankind. Six necklaces, each with a different power corresponding to their gem. Ruby for fire. Sapphire for water. Emerald for earth. Diamond for time. Topaz for climate and weather. Lapis Lazuli for space and dimensional powers. Only the warriors chosen by the gems could find them, and they would be granted immortality until they were killed in battle. Two had fallen to the Devil. Four remain.
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Chapter 3: (Kinatia's capital) The queen turned the Diamond necklace over in her hand. She remembered the day this necklace fell from the sky centuries ago. Due to the power of this necklace, she had not aged. Prior to that, she had been part of a group of her friends, traveling across the world killing demons as they went. The six were herself, Luna, Yumi, Melissa, Jasmine and Karen. In the final battle with the Devil, Melissa and Jasmine were killed, the Ruby and Sapphire stones shattered. They had restored peace to the land. They had no more purpose than other people. The group disbanded, each heading their own way. Yumi had travelled to her home continent in the southeast, seperated by months of sailing time. Luna went to the mountains where she would pray for humanity's welfare. Karen traveled to the continent in the west, where she was born. Grace herself had become Queen of Kinatia. It was time to bring the necklace to use again (Vyctin's capital) Darian, now possessed by the Devil who had slowly regained strength, was alone in a field. He slammed a pure-black sword into the ground. Thousands of skeletons arose, cracklings with black electricity. Armed with a variety of swords and spears, they would serve as an effective army. Darian killed all the rebels and Vyctin's armies with the summoned skeletons. The sky darkened. The darkening of the sky was the last thing many people ever saw.