Ya here be some poems. Feel free to post feedback/ your own poems here too. Almost Alliteration. Standing. In shattered starlight, Shapes slither Sharply shining Jagged tears lighting up the sky. Crying. Gasping out, Ghouls groping Going nowhere fast Glinting wetly a red too deep. Stairs. No respite, They dig down deeper Drowning dirt Death, Decay. Deserted. Dreadful in it's destruction Hidden. Hoarded hokum, Hideous haggard faces Hysterical with happiness Heralds hushed, High again. (zomg it doesn't rhyme) Answers. What cause is this? What time of day? Surely you would rather be here and fight, than gamble out and play. Speed and rhythm? No- reason and rhyme. Spell them right this time. It's slipped through my fingers. I'm sorry- when God opens a window, he closes a door- It may happen still, it might- Clean that off the kitchen floor. Late again, but may I add: this quiche is quite sublime, It bends reality, I stutter, lost in time. Don't protest, you know full well, That only time and gain will tell. Don't change the subject; I know full well, The tricks you pull, and weave and spin, How your thoughts pulse and swell. Your lack of faith does not bode well, Yet I forgive, if not forget... You are looking almost thin, Since I lost our biscuit tin. x.X
Haha. Ok it's not what I call a hobby, kaw is a hobby, poems are 5 minutes of typing stuff. I don't believe in most poems or art, bias audience is bias. You need new feedback.
you writing poems in five minutes is abundantly clear. if you spent large amounts of time writing this garbage, that'd be even more embarrassing.