AWAKENING FEEDBACK PAGE

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by colonial, Oct 14, 2010.

  1. I've scrapped the other story, mainly because I was deleting old notes on my iPod and deleted the other story by mistake... So I started thinking of a new one. I'll post the prologue here, now... And post the next part when I get it completed in a different thread.

    URGENT ONLY POST YOUR RESPONSES IN THIS THREAD
     
  2. AWAKENING

    Centuries ago... When all seemed lost, and the world was engulfed in turmoil. Every nation fought for it's right to stay independent, alliances were made and broken. Even the greater nations were at their limits, did a powerful being arise to end the quarrelling nations. Once the world was finally at peace did this being disappear. Shrines were erected in honor of the end of the great world war... and legend has it that one shrine holds this being if ever it was needed once more.
     
  3. I really like it but what do u want me to do
     
  4. Great starting, but there doesn't seem to be any major conflict that appears. But then again, it's a prologue so idk. Can't wait to read more.

    iZaln
     
  5. Yep. Would definitely help if there was a problem or conflict. Looks interesting Col.
     
  6. Looks good.
    Seth
     
  7. You can post here via comp, or else email yourself the story. That would save you a ton of iPod typing.
     
  8. I like using my iPod. Lol. Besides, it's the only thing that is truely mine. I have no pc. So when I can I type on this 
     
  9. (>")>Colonial<("<)
     
  10. First chapter is up
     
  11. I'm going to need seth73, izaln, conqueress, irin, and bastion to pal me a bio. Just a background and types of weapons the character uses, I know which faction they will be. This is going to be interesting.
     
  12. Oooohh.... I like whips, chains & .....feathers! Yeah. Go with that.
     
  13. And stora too please
     
  14. Bump for readers to get the hyperlink
     
  15. Bump for the rest of the people who have not yet palringo'd me