Assassin's Creed: Descendants Feedback and Etc.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Nlaz, Aug 17, 2010.

  1. Hello guys and gals, itza me Zalnoro... Ignore that, I couldnt find a Mario like thing. Anywayyy... Im writing a new story, which is titled "Assassin's Creed: Descendants"

    To sum up my main purpose right now, I'm just gonna give you a small beta (heheh, I used b-e-t-a) of the story to give you an idea. For a timeline kinda thing, this takes place after the events of Assassin's Creed Brotherhood which features Ezio Auditore de Firenze chasing the Borgia (a corrupted family) to Rome, and rebuilding the Brotherhood of Assassins to take down the Borgia Family House. In my story, I will be focusing on my made-up character, Ezio Auditore the Secondo de Venenzia, the off-spring of Ezio Auditore. As all Assassins aim to do, they wish to eradicate the Templars whom are a power group of people obsessed with taking their places as rulers of the world. Also, since Ezio Auditore di Firenze started recruiting his own Brotherhood of Assassins, this focuses on the future of the Assassin Order, mainly being the children of the original Brotherhood in Rome. To make it a bit more... Relatable (spell-check lol), I've decided to choose the time when Ezio Jr. (I like it XD) first takes the reigns of the Assassin Brotherhood in Rome, just after the sudden death of the first Ezio Auditore.

    So that wraps up the main storyline, but that isnt the first half of it, a larger, more deadly conspiracy is about to unravel into the hands of Ezio Audiore the Secondo de Venenzia. Also, let me clarify a few things, Venenzia is Venice in Italian; Firenze is Florence; and Rome is also called Roma.

    And finally, a prize for reading through it (or skipping the main chunk lol), I am allowing anyone to sign up, but it must be an Italian-related name, so might wanna start using your Safari App. If you wish to have an immediate part, also list you occupation, such as the Women Assassins can be Courtesans or Doctors, or Nuns. Mencan choose from Butchers, Doctors, etc. So if so, pick a profession from the "Middle Ages" or around the Reniassance. Anyway, thanks and be prepared, anything may happen...

    iZaln Enterprises
     
  2. Luigi! Do I need to make a bio and such?
     
  3. Nah, no need for bios, just name, and if you wish, occupation. Thats primarily it. Btw, no Mario because I said so.

    iZaln
     
  4. Bastion

    Pleaseeeee it's close enough to Italian
     
  5. Hmmm how about Basito? Or Bastionia? Maybe Bastas?

    iZaln
     
  6. Any of those work
     
  7. I think Basito would be fine.

    iZaln
     
  8. Vincenzo... The leader of the thieves guild and highest ranking field operative inside the Order of Assassins (next to Ezio obviously).
     
  9. So Vincezo? It sounds okay. Although I would have preferred Vincento, Vincezo fits the job. As for the guild leader, it sounds perfecto.

    iZaln
     
  10. @Bjorn
    Hmm, Lucas and Luke don't quite qualify, perhaps Luciano?

    iZaln
     
  11. It has begun. Chapter one is up.

    iZaln
     
  12. OMFG ITS SO AWESOME ZALN
     
  13. Can you make Ruli Italian somehow?
     
  14. Very nice Zaln, you seem to have done it again.
    might as well make a bio.
    Name: Salvatore
    Occupation: Blacksmith
     
  15. Name:Vincezno
    occupation: town guard (if I can do that)
     
  16. Bianca? It's Italian right?