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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Kimber03 (01), Dec 20, 2010.

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  1. The title is similar to my last Greek mythology story, but the plot of this story will be different. As you should know by now, DO NOT POST ON THE STORY! Please post feedback here along with ideas or any mistakes you might catch. This is probably the last story I'm posting here so enjoy this one! :D Thanks!
    Story Link:Ascent of the Gods

    *BONUS QUESTION* Chapter 1: With the characters mentioned so far, which Greek god do you think they're associated with?
     
    #1 *Kimber03 (01), Dec 20, 2010
  2. I've never read any of your past stories but this story is very good so far!
    Are they associated with Zeus?
     
    #2 Storallelite, Dec 20, 2010
  3. Each character is a different god.
     
    #3 *Kimber03 (01), Dec 20, 2010
  4. Opps...
    Ok...um Elaine=Athena, Delta=Ares, Cyndia=Athrodite, Hector=Apollo
     
    #4 Storallelite, Dec 20, 2010
  5. Oh yeah Patrick=Hermes
    And actually I think Delta is Zeus and Hector is Ares
     
    #5 Storallelite, Dec 20, 2010
  6. You got Elaine, Delta, and Cyndia right in the first post.
     
    #6 *Kimber03 (01), Dec 20, 2010
  7. Three out of five is good enough for me! Keep writing!!
     
    #7 Storallelite, Dec 20, 2010
  8. I live for criticism so please post!

    *BONUS QUESTION* Chapter 2: Which Greek myth is Chapter 2 centered on?
     
    #8 *Kimber03 (01), Dec 20, 2010
  9. Why do I never get comments for my stories?
     
    #9 *Kimber03 (01), Dec 20, 2010
  10. It's middle of day most ppl r probly at work or mayb school don't worry bout it
     
    #10 german_idiot, Dec 20, 2010
  11. Chapter 3 posted and no Bonus Question today, couldn't think of one.
     
    #11 *Kimber03 (01), Dec 21, 2010
  12. Oh how bouts the question is

     
    #12 german_idiot, Dec 21, 2010
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    #13 *Kimber03 (01), Dec 21, 2010
  14. BLASPHEMY!!!! I never wrote that
     
    #14 german_idiot, Dec 21, 2010
  15. i never wrote that either
     
    #15 *Kimber03 (01), Dec 21, 2010
  16. Touché
     
    #16 german_idiot, Dec 21, 2010
  17. Ch. 2 is the myth that Aphrodite and Posiden making out in Atheba's temple! Oh and btw, great job!
     
    #17 *lady-marian (01), Dec 21, 2010
  18. Very close lady, but not Aphrodite.
     
    #18 *Kimber03 (01), Dec 22, 2010
  19. Sorry, Medusa!
     
    #19 *lady-marian (01), Dec 22, 2010
  20. Post more!
     
    #20 *taylor13589 (01), Dec 24, 2010
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