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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by CrayzJayz, Mar 12, 2011.

  1. Ohai. I'm writing another story now. Hopefully I'll be able to get past the prologue on this one ;) post-apocalyptic. No troolls.
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    Name
    Age
    Human/robot/other
    Appearance
    Personality
    Other
     
    #1 CrayzJayz, Mar 12, 2011
  2. Btw thats a good piece of writing, but i think theirs 1 spelling mistake i noticed right at the end! :L i let u find it
     
    #2 *NecroHyphen (01), Mar 12, 2011
  3. I don't see it, but I'll try to be more careful :p
     
    #3 CrayzJayz, Mar 12, 2011
  4. I see it and I'll also let you find it…
     
    #4 Interrobang, Mar 12, 2011
  5. Name : Poison
     
    #5 *Poisonfang (02), Mar 12, 2011
  6. Name: Poison
    Age: 13
    Gender female
    Other ( Werewolf)
     
    #6 *Poisonfang (02), Mar 12, 2011
  7. Name: Poison
    Age: 13
    werewolf
    Appreence: hard to tell
     
    #7 *Poisonfang (02), Mar 12, 2011
  8. Name: Poison
    Age: 13 years old
    Werewolf
    Appearence: hard to tell
    Personality: aggresive and protective
    Other: has sharp claws

    At the age of 12 Poison found out that she was a werewolf . She tried her best to keep it from her friends but eventually she couldn't.
     
    #8 *Poisonfang (02), Mar 12, 2011
  9. I like ur descriptions, I found it easy to form an image in my mind. Good start!
     
    #9 Storallelite, Mar 12, 2011
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