All in Vain - A poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Lightning_Facade, Mar 6, 2012.

  1. In English class one day we were assigned to write a poem using words taken only from The Telltale Heart by Edgar Allen Poe. (Quite difficult, actually.) This is my contribution :p

    All in Vain


    I am Death,
    My own powers, ere,
    Sharpened, ha!
    All in vain, all in vain.
    My black shadow watches,
    watches all in vain!
    Almighty God!
    My Soul! My Soul is damned,
    all in vain,
    passion, murder, evil.
    To my heart, hellish heart.
    All in vain, all in vain.
    I bade them enter, i had no fear.
    Then the heart! His hideous heart!
    All in vain, all in vain.
    I smiled cunningly, dreadful echo,
    ere, my murder,
    All in vain.
     
  2. I demand more!! :D
     
  3. Hehe.
    Btw, if you've ever met d_bo, please read my poem :3 It doesn't trash him at all. I just think it might be an entertaining read for you.
     
  4. @Lethal, lmao, thanks :D i do have another poem that isn't dark, but idk if the kawcommunity is ready for it. i've seen some of your poems, you are the bomb :D

    @Lunar, link?
     
  5. It's down here somewhere o_O xD
     
  6. thank u!! -huggles you- XD much appreciated. My self esteem has been pretty low lately. People like u make my day!! OwO
     
  7. Btw, I think I'm ready for ur poem. I need to see...@_@
     
  8. Alright Lethal, just cause you asked, gonna right it in new topic cause it's so different from this one :3 Give me 5 minutes to type ay? Only downfall of writing in iPod notes :p
     
  9. YESH!!!!! ~(^-^)~ -does my happy dance-
     
  10. Yea. Writing in notes is stupid xP
     
  11. Yay ^~^ I still think this one should stay alive though.
     
  12. :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: WOWOWOWOWOWO! love it!
     
  13. >.< What're the commotions about? -.-