A World of Ruins Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Starwars6374, Nov 26, 2010.

  1. This is the feedback thread for my story, A World of Ruins, please post about my story here.
     
  2. Destruction has happened on Earth. Alien Technology has caused all of humanity to disappear 100 years into the future. The world is in ruins and technology is gone. A war has broken out between those who survived in this Earth. Can a group of teenagers survive or will they all die in this world of ruins?

    COMING SOON

    Updates:
    Nov. 30, 2010: Character Sign-up opened

    Story Updates:
    Nov. 25, 2010: Prologue posted

    Character Creation: OPEN
    If you would like to be in my story fill out the for below.

    Name: (choose)
    Age: (choose, main roles are teenager, but adults might be used for smaller parts)
    Nationality: (any modern country, please post region if using countries like Canada or USA)
    Personality:
    Apperance:
    Bio: (keep it brief)
    Other:

    Remember that most modern technology does not work and there is no magic in my story

    As a note, this is my alt. It is on PC so it is the only way to edit posts
     
  3. You shouldn't have said that there was a nuke in the prologue. It would've been a good surprise later.
     
  4. Ok, I'm a little busy with school but I'll try and start the story. I need characters. It will be added to the second post
     
  5. Bump.

    I need characters. I may make a new story thread so I can make minor changes.