I'm writing a story. Chapter 1 Ok, ok, I know what your thinking. Why is a middle school boy going to a girls school dressed up as a clown. Well here is the answer; I don't know. It just sort of happened. Let's start at the beginning. This morning I was arguing with my sister. Don't ask what we were arguing about, you don't want to know. Suddenly my best friend walked into the room wearing nothing but underwear. Damn! I had completely forgotten! My best friend Dave's got a date with my sister today. Ok, bow your probably thinking why my best friend is dating my sister. Never-mind about that, so Dave walked in and my sister yelled out a shout of delight. Dave groaned. He obviously did not enjoy his dates with my sister. My sister must not have noticed because she kept yelling. Outside of my window, I could see something small and black. I stared down curiously while my sister pulled Dave down on the bed. What I saw was a telescope. The new neighbor was spying on me, again. I groaned and jumped onto the bed. The wrong one. I landed on top of the body of Dave and my sister. They both yelled out in surprise and pain. To be continued So what did u thunk of the first chapter?
continues Chapter 2 Dave squealed at me. "What the ****!" he yelled! I raised my hands in defense but that didn't seem to help. Now he was blinking mad. Staring at me with those scary blue eyes of his, my sister cowering behind him. Approaching me like I was a devil sent to kill him, he whispered my name. I was bloody scared. "S-s-sorry it was an accident." He groaned and eyed me carefully. "NEVER DO THAT AGAIN!" he screamed a little too loud. Downstairs my dog started barking as if his life was in danger. I heard the neighbor moan from next door. I grinned. At least that pedophile neighbor gets annoyed. Dave caught me grinning and my expression immediately changed. I heard sone loud giggling from the neighbor and when I looked he was trying to stop laughing. He was already spying on me again. Never-mind let's get back to Dave. So he yelled at me again. This time I didn't hear it. From my neighbor's house came a large noise. It puzzled me for a moment then I realized it was an explosion. Dave and my sister were staring out the window their eyes wide. The neighbor's house was in pieces and he somehow was still alive. I notices he wasn't wearing anything and so did my sister. She was blushing in embarrassment and I was just thinking that the neighbor was just plain stupid to be spying on me naked. To be continued
Chapter 3 Suddenly Dave couldn't take it any longer. "Can't you see anything?! You two are just looking at him as if he's an idiot and not even realizing he's in trouble!" Suddenly me and my sister snapped out of our trance and I accidentally fell out the window. I ended up landing on our neighbor. He was screaming now. I think I might of... Never-mind. So he's screaming at me. So now I just whisper into his ear, "why were you spying on me?" and he just chokes at me. Suddenly a very heavy figure landed on my back. It was Dave. He practically lifted up the neighbor and walked with him in the air. People were staring like they were crazy. I mean, a boy in his underwear, carrying a boy not in anything. It was actually pretty funny and I think I spotted a couple of girls giggling near the end of the street. I turned around and stared at my sister. That was strange, how did she get down here? Then I realized she must have landed on the neighbor's bushes because they were crushed to bits and just outside the range of the explosion. Ah, well. We followed Dave out the street and then we realized he was taking the neighbor to the hospital. Hospitals creep me out. My sister knew this and she started grinning evilly. I turned back an she put on an actor's face and said," where do you think you are going?" Damn! I walked solemnly to the hospital and once we arrived there, all was not as it seemed. To be continued