I open my curtains to the sight of beauty. There, the fireflies glimmered and flew back and forth for not a care in the world. I laid my head on my crossed arms to such a magnificent scene. Then I spot something that put a smile to my face. A couple in the background holding hands and dancing around freely. Then I knew that was the meaning of love. I let my eye lashes flutter and soon my eye lids shut. I then find myself dreaming; dreaming that one day I will find true love. Love that the couple showed together that night.
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This is the beginning of my story: A Day in the Life of an Epic Battle. lolmakeacenterAbandoned Kingdom lolMy name's Visceral, Visceral Goldsmith. I'm a commander in the Kingdom army. Me and my men have been traveling for a few days over the sea, trying to get to the "Highlands" so we can end this Goddamn war. We have seen no problems so far, it's been smooth sailing for almost 7 days now. lol"Sir! We see movement under the water!" Shouts my personal guard over the crashing of the waves. lolI step out o my cabin and walk to the side of the deck. My sword sheath jingling against my belt, I walk over to the railing and look below. lolA tentacle wips out and grabs one of my spies, crushing his spine before he can even scream. We all stop for a second and watch the gory mess fall to the floor. lol"It's Z'uthmerak!" a sails man cries. lol"Everyone take cover!" I shout. lol"Fire!" lolA hail of arrows engulf the tentacle on the starboard, leaving it limp and dragging the ship down. lol"Push it off the deck or we'll drown!" my guard shouts. lolWe all immediately jump into action, forming a phalanx and moving across the deck slowly toward the dead tentacle. We reached the tentacle and pushed it off, not before the port side tentacle smashes into the phalanx and killing 8 of my men. lol"Concentrate on the last tentacle!" I shout, just as two fearless swordsmen jump and grab hold of the tentacle without fear of their lives. lolI see one of the men fall off as the tentacle flails. The other swordsman succeeds in climbing to the bottom and sawing off the tentacle. lolAfter the tentacle is cut off, I see the man fall into the beasts mouth itself. lolWe hear a crack as his rectum get bitten in half. lolWe look down at the pool of blood slowly forming in the water as the white form of Z'uthmerak swims away. lolatyoulThe Ruins lolWe were traveling for seven days now, racing back to our kingdom to warn them about their impending doom. lolI glanced at my guard, his pale skin showed no sign of ever tanning, and yet he had dirty blonde hair and green eyes. He looked around 29 with his lean body and 5.9 feet of height. lolAfter we had defeated Z'uthmerak we knew that we had to sail back to our kingdom before it was destroyed. lolI walked into my cabin and looked at the full body mirror opposite the room's door. lolWhat I saw there looked very different from what it looked before the fight. What I saw in the mirror was a 36-year-old with black hair protruding in all all different directions. I also saw the normal deep blue eyes that my family has always had, a blue that looks darker than the sea at night. I was about 5.11 feet by 19, when I had stopped growing. Even though I've heard of growing potions before, I don't want to make myself look like a lion that has gotten a growth spurt, it would be unnatural. My hair looked a lot better before the fight, shaped in a side curve that was standard for all commanders in the kingdom army. lolI sighed and looked out the window to the gentle waves of the ever churning sea outside us. lolA muffled sound came from outside the door, it took me a few seconds to realize it was from the lookout, "Sir! Kingdom Valley in sight! It, it looks destroyed sir!" he shouted. lolI immediately ran onto the deck and started climbing up the ropes to the lookout tower. lolBy the time I reached the top of the tower and looked through the telescope I knew Kingdom Valley was already destroyed. lol"Well, looks like it's a ground game now," I muttered. /--------/-------/--------/ lolWe reached the shore and disembarked from the ship. lol"Sir! I recommend we go to Delise's castle! It would give us a clear view of what happened and would also provide us with weapons and ammunition," two soldiers said. lol"That would be a good plan. Move out!" I barked. lolDelise was the main marketplace of Gruoidar, the country we were in. It also hosted the biggest castle and amount of guards. I was already thinking of it but I didn't think it was a good idea until both of these men had voiced their opinion. /--------/-------/--------/ lolWe reached the castle after 3 hours of relentless walking. lol"Crack the door open! Let's see who sleeping beauty is." I said. lolMy rammers hastily ran forward and pounded the door with their ram. After 7 or so hits, the door gave way. lol"Move out men! Let's find out what's taken this place!" I shouted. lolI took a group of five men with me plus my personal guard. lol"We'll take the west side!" I said. /--------/-------/--------/ lolWe were walking through an alleyway when we heard a scream. I ran forward and saw woman's remains on the ground, torn apart by some sort of ghastly creature. I looked up to see where it might have come from when something jumped onto my back, clawing at my throat. Go to clan GG for more awesomeness.
What part? And the plot is about a girl whose parents fight every night and she had just found out her boyfriend cheated on her so life is rough and she thinks, what is love? She runs away and finds an orphanage and looks at it. And then she realizes that they have life worst than her so she continues her trip to a hospital and looks at children with cancer and realizes her life is good compared to theirs and she goes home to her parents working together to find her and they find that they have put her through too much and what they fight about is silly so they stop fighting from then on
But they will have to make a Sad and depressing section of a store for that so put some happiness in too
Oo sounds good ok but thats in the beginning where the next day after school she comes to her parents fighting
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