I open my curtains to the sight of beauty. There, the fireflies glimmer and fly back and forth for not a care in the world. I lay my head of my crossed arms to such a magnificent scene. Then I spot something that puts a smile to my face. A couple in the background holding hands and dancing around freely. Then I knew that was the meaning of love. I let my eye lashes flutter and soon my eye lids shut. I then find myself dreaming; dreaming that one day I will find true love. Love that the couple showed together that night. please comment below
Nice, such a sweet scene. Just be careful not to over describe.(You didn't do it but I think you could be in danger of over describing perhaps.) can't say much about plot/progression because there's so little. You should write more.